Chapter 1: Very well written!

beyond beautiful:')

That was beautiful <3

oww.... that's a beautiful story :)<br />
I really love that song you used here ^^ it's such a wonderful love song, and it fits so good with your story :)

Awesome!! Love the story :)

They spent half a month, avoiding each other until Jinki, Minho and Taemin grew sick of them emoing and shoved them in a closet and locked them in.<br />
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I can imagine it totally. This is what came into mind:<br />
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*Onew and Minho drag JongKey to closet; Taemin watches warily*<br />
JongKey: "Let us go. Stop this!"<br />
*Throws them in; Locks door*<br />
Key: "Open this door right now. You will starve, STARVE. No chicken!"<br />
Onew: O.O "Noooo." *moves towards door*<br />
*Minho grabs him, pulls Onew away; Taemin follows*<br />
Taemin: *looks at door* "Minho? Do you think we are doing the right thing?"<br />
Minho: *continues dragging the struggling Minho* "Yes...no...either way we will get to sleep tonight."<br />
Onew: *crys* My beautiful chicken... TT,TT

nice one shot.

Hihi! I don't usually read one-shots but this title caught my eye, so I decided to give it a chance and boy am I glad I did!<br />
I loved it :D