He's Not You

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No matter how hard  I've tried to love him. It's still feels strange. Compared to you, he was an angel. But he just got a single mistake. He's Not You.

 

Cast : Eli, Kiseop, Hazel (OC)

I was inspired by David Archuleta's song, She's not you :)

This is my first fanfiction.

well, enjoy!

P. S : grammar mistakes everywhere. I'm not that good at english ToT so, bear with me.

Foreword

“I’m sorry, Eli. This can’t go on anymore.” I said.

 

“NO! I’m not gonna let you go! NEVER!” Eli said, his grip on my wrist was getting tighter than ever.

 

“If you love me, let me go now! Loving you hurts me, Eli.” Tears started to fall as I snapped his hands from my wrist and ran away from him.

 

. . .

 

“Hazel, do you still love him?” Kiseop asked me.

 

“Him? Who?” I asked him back, not giving any answer.

 

“Eli.” Kiseop said shortly.

 

My heart ached, “No.” I answered.

 

“Then, Can I replace him?” He asked me.

 

“What?” I asked him, I felt so shock.

 

“I love you, Hazel. I’m not gonna treat you like he did.” Kiseop said while taking me into his arms.

 

. . .

P. S : Well, I know that it's kinda too long to be a foreword. but, this is all I've prepared :)

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elisblackhole
#1
HI! I'm alive! YAY!
I'm sorry guys, for not updating this fic. It's just I don't have any interest anymore, I thought no one like this fic, since the 1st month I made this fic, I found 0 subscribers and 0 comments. So I gave up and abandon this. But then recently I just knew that I have 5 subscribers! That's alot! Thanks for reading this fic, and I'll try to get this fic updated ASAP :)
Haylle
#2
update!
elikiseop44 #3
UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! :D