Please, Don't Go

Description

"You can’t, you can’t, don’t leave like this
Please just one more time, one more time, hold me in your arms again"

What if Taemin left Jinki?

Will they cope with their situation?

Foreword

A little sad and angsty story/songfic from me this time.

I was captivated by Jonghyun and Onew's duet 'Please Don't Go'. It's such a sad and touching song... You can totally feel their emotion practically oozing.

I recommend you to put it on repeat while you read this, or at least the part where I put the lyrics is.

I hope I can touch your feelings with this fic, because a good writer makes her reader go along with the emotion in her work. Or at least that's what I thought.

Send me some comments, please? I want to make a fluffy sequel for this one, but you gotta tell me whether you want it or not...

Enjoy this story~

Lyrics taken from : http://minsarang.wordpress.com/2009/05/25/lyrics-shinee-please-dont-go-%EC%9E%A0%EA%BC%AC%EB%8C%80-rom-eng-kor/

Link of the song : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-6Tmsfr3c74

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misskimhee #1
Chapter 1: OMG IM CRYING ;__;
i just can't imagine how happy onew was when taemin hugged him ;__;
AnotherFairytale #2
Chapter 1: Uwahhh! Taemin came back!
ontaeshawol #3
*sobs* phiiee, dudeee. you make ontaeshawol sad. in a good way. this is very sweet and like just that it really wasn't that bad but because Jinki was in one of those moods it made everything so much worse.
XxBlowingxBubblesxX #4
I can't cry , and I'm not going to! Oh forget it!!! Im drowning in my freaking tears!!!! You taken my ONTAE obsession to a whole new level
Emmauk26 #5
OMO, are you trying to kill me, lol, so sad, and so sweet; that song always makes me cry; I'm glad that Tae came back to him, love it, OnTae FOREVER. ;-D <3<3
lee_anna22 #6
aaaa....this is so sad..huhu..T_T
Kpopizschveet #7
I legit nearly cried. it was the sweetest thing evs. loved it. u da man!!! XD
EveNiN #8
Yep..I'm probably reading it for the 100th time...it's addictive!!! And it is one of the best OnTae fluff I've read so far and I do ship OnTae very much!
jinkijeans #9
This was very lovely. you're making me teary eyed again. lol
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