The Silent Conversation

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He was always deemed as the perfect guy, with impeccable results and everything you could ever wish for, whilst she was always the person in between.

But will one little, average girl turn his heart in a different direction, developing into something worth more than words?

 

Foreword

 

Hello world! I'll be completely honest and say that I decided to take a whack at this, that translates to this being done on a whim; so this is a completely new world and a really really really uncharted territory for me. I'm evidently venturing out and I hope I don't disappoint. 

This will be my one-shot entry for vanillasushi's contest, Blossom Roads.

Please don't expect much, in school, I used to think that 700 words for an essay were nothing, and I guess it was sorta true then? But now, I cry and I die. I might just end it at 1.5k plus? That's probably my ultimate bench mark. Who knows... maybe I'd be able to do more, if I deem fit? But that's highly unlikely. Sighs. This is hard.

I'm a relatively (space-time humor not intended) shy person so I don't necessarily talk much unless we are somehow stranded from everyone and we somewhat click? So, this one-shot scenario in particular has a few similarities to what I go through in life. Nope, don't feel sad for me cause I have a close knit group (we tight) and I don't stray... so that sorta means I'm a loyal friend, no...?  So, uh, yeah, here's The Silent Conversation. 

That's really it from me so... bye, adios, bye...

 

 

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unicornbby #1
Chapter 1: Ahh so cute , im curious what happen next and the way sehun knew about her colored pens make me SMILE
key_key1 #2
Chapter 1: Cute cute cute sehun really cute when he peek at oc can sehun be more manly, believe that oc still single and if sehun ask her out she will agree. My first time reading story with no conversation and one shot that must read.
siririta #3
Chapter 1: its cute and lately addict with one shot so i search and found this. this is my first time read story like this aah its like sehun dream about girls. can sehun just ask her something and pretend to borrow her pen maybe.
theother88 #4
Chapter 1: hmmm.....i wonder what will happen to their next real conversation
windyocean #5
Chapter 1: Awwww I really want to know what happened next thooooo Hunnie ish sho kyute
lovebearxx71 #6
Chapter 1: I enjoyed this! Thank you
x169618x #7
Chapter 1: THIS IS SO CUTE ><
markermelon #8
Chapter 1: this is so cute hahaha i wonder if sehun is like that in real life when he's crushing on someone hehehe
spaghetti_soda #9
Chapter 1: Is it weird to say that I have the same personality and behavior as the OC? And this story is well written. I like it ^.^
vanillasushi #10
Chapter 1: Lmao when Sehun noticed her different colored pens... had me smiling because CUTE.

This story was so short!!! There wasn't even development or anything, it was stationary, as in it only stayed in one spot, never moving on, never moving back. And though I thought I didn't like it, thinking about it again made me realise that I actually DO like it. Because it is different and special, in a way that there is actually a story in stagnant water, if I may actually say that. Grammar was also on point and the paragraphing was great! It wasn't too short or too long and the words you used complemented well with each other. Great job on this piece!

Thank you for joining Blossom Roads! It's a pleasure reading this and I hope you had fun writing this as well. I hope that you'll learn something from this and maybe feel even more motivated and inspired to keep writing. Also, I think it's hard writing an OC without names but i'm bad at coming up with names and i'm too lazy to do so LOL.. it all boils down to laziness really.

Xoxo
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