Just Say You Won't Let Go

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He looked at me in the eye, his face showing a beautiful pain that made my heart hurt, "Just say you won't let go," he whispered hoarsely, barely able to contain the tremble of his lips, "I'll do everything you ask if you do."

I kissed the palm of his hand, "I love you Byun Baekhyun."

"Prosmise me, please," Baekhyun said brokenly, "I love you."

A salty tear left me, "Good-bye, Baekhyun."

And the last thing I heard was a sob from my beloved.

Foreword

A story of love, heartbreak, and life

 

 

 

 

Inspired by Say You Won't Let Go by James Arthur 

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Gothbfmark #1
Chapter 3: I AM proud of my muffin !
Tsk tsk tsk.
(small note: You forgot to call her Haneul when Baek meets Taeyeon. You called her Julia instead)
Gothbfmark #2
Chapter 1: It's oddly interesting. That is definitely not what I expected.
I mean, sure the bullying part is well described and pretty realistic (tha'ss good), and for a moment I thought about the MV 'Stop Stop it' from GOT7 when Jae was about to fall if the girl said no. (just for the visuals, eh) the part that surprised me was - well, usually when there is a girl that comes and prevents the hurt boy (BBH in this case) from killing himself, the author always chooses some skinny "naturally beautiful", short as girl that was actually miss popular or some really cliché ideal beauty.
And this girl is none of that - which I a change and I would say a good twist.
Plus, the little inside jokes at the end lighten the atmosphere from all the gloomy/tragic tone of the story.
Me like the combination of angst and fluff in there. It's pretty well balanced. ^^
Oh and also, I like that you played with the language. The sky forecast and Haneul/the sizzling Baekhyun. (I'm a literally student, ok? I like languages)
Light_orb #3
Chapter 1: This is nice story line.. and I am looking forward to it...
But something made me confused... ' whether there were three girls or only one, cause I read three different names Haneul, Gauel and Julia..???'
Undulating_IN #4
Chapter 1: This is really awesome. I love it!!! Wth is chanyeol's problem?? Cant wait for the next update! For real i love it!!!
Undulating_IN #5
On*
Undulating_IN #6
Okay this is weird i am actually listening to James Arthur's Recovery right now lol. Its in repeat.
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