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my immortal
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"you used to captivate me by your resonating light.

now i'm bound by the life you left behind.

your face, it haunts my once pleasant dreams.

your voice, it chased away all the sanity in me"

warm spread slowly from her neck to her face, she could feel her cheeks heated up on her palm. the eight year old girl couldn't help but smilling from ear to ear upon the hold on her hand by a boy who has been occuping heer mind lately. he feeling is new for her, though they have been together since baby, this tingly feeling never felt that noticable before.

the girl staring at his side profile staring at the boy who's by years growing to be a young man. voice that used to be as high as her no a little deep, hands and fingers that used to look dalicate now feels tough, eyes that used to hod sparkling innocence now look sharp. though not so much difference but she is aware how she can not put her eyes away from the boy.

walking side by side at the sidewalk, his hold firm on her hand. his step now following her pace and his warm radiating on her. that's all she noticed every afternoon after the school bell rang. she feels content.

"why are you so clumsy?"

face showed confussion when they step and he turned to her. her eyes on his light brown orbs but the boy staring ahead at something on her fringe. she noticed how his hand reach her cheek and lifted her heated face up then his other free hand rushing her fringe. white dust blown away from her hair by the air coming their way.

the scene in front of her looks magical, his face sparkling by the effect of that white dust-probably chalk powder. but his smile makes her forget reality and lost

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Sweet_Alyssum #1
Chapter 12: I've never seen that coming tho, honestly I dislike Ji in here for being such a dickhead for constantly thinking Chae is being childish and immature. The problem is that Ji, you made her feel that way and as a wife Chaerin needs assurance from his man. Actions sometimes are not enough and so does words, if the situation were handled first-hand then the consequences wouldn't turn into a disaster and full of regrets.


And back to the inspiration behind the story, I'd say it's well thought.
babyda91
#2
Chapter 12: I cannot give you upvote before..but now here i am again to give you one after done read again..will come again tho.
syeda_fz #3
Chapter 12: The*$#+??? I hate sad endings!!! Damn poor CL is always in pain!!!
babyda91
#4
Chapter 10: And yess Jiyong so cruel & selfish how could he is not even once say 'i love you' bfore. Then Chae continue suffer T^T until the END
babyda91
#5
Chapter 12: I hate youuuu
babyda91
#6
Chapter 12: OMGGGGGGGGGGG
blackwonderer #7
Chapter 12: Now if you understand the lyric, i'm sure u will get why i put the ending this way. As i Said please mind the lyric because those would tell how the story goes. Thank your for your support till now. I hope u will appreciate this story even though it's So far from perfect. Hope u had a good time reading this, n see u in my other stories if u would gladly read them ^^
babyda91
#8
Chapter 8: Omg Jiyong such a dickhead. I hate him. He so selfish, put Chae for granted only. Told Chae to wait but he play as much as he want. Chae better for someone else! >_<
Vivianv96 #9
Chapter 7: Omg update soon
DJ_GONG
#10
Chapter 5: Ugggghhhh..... I hate this side of Jiyong.... bunnyboy a.k.a playboy... poor Chae eomma T.T