Migraine

Description

When Nayoung finally gets home the clock marks 9 p.m. She is soaked wet because, oh joy, it started to rain really heavily and she forgot to take her umbrella when she exited the apartment in the morning. She sped through the stairs grumbling at the heavens because the lift that was in perfect condition this morning was now out of order, and that meant she had to walk through ten floors to reach her apartment.

She was tired, hell, that was a serious understatement, she was spent both physically and psychologically and she just wanted to rest, her head felt like it was going to explode at any minute and she couldn’t take it anymore. She closed the door and started to go through the wall looking for the light switch. She found it and switched it on…

And off…

And on…

And off again…

There was no power, fantastic, she was seriously seething, it seemed that it wasn’t enough her boss suddenly decided to shut down her investigation or that she had to stay overtime to help Chungha sort papers out, the world was out to with her and she was about to punch her poor innocent wall into submission in retaliation for her ty luck when she noticed something.

Something was off, once her eyes adjusted to the darkness in the room she could see it clearly, somebody had been there before her. It was a minuscule detail, something that would go unnoticed for more than 90% of the world’s population, but not for Im Nayoung. One of her books in the library was slightly more out of the shelf than the rest, Nayoung walked to it and picked it up, it wasn’t a book per se, it was a folder, the folder that had all the data she gathered for the investigation she had been conducting until now. Nayoung was beginning to feel uncomfortable, who was it that broke into her house? More importantly, was that person still there? The only other person that had a key to her apartment was Chungha, and they were together the whole evening, then again, there were no signs of neither a door nor a window being forcibly opened, maybe it was just Nayoung's imagination, she was really stressed after the whole morning ordeal and she was being paranoid over a tilted folder.

All those thoughts evaporated when she heard another sound coming from the kitchen area.

Her hand started moving to the gun on her belt until she heard a sound she knew very well, a pistol safety being removed, from behind. Nayoung froze in place.

“Tssk, why do they always put a hit on the pretty ones?”

Foreword

Hey there, been thinking about writing a story for aff for a long time, it's not the first time i write but it is the first time i write in english. As you may deduce from that, english is not my main language so i apologize for any mistakes made in the future.

This idea has been stuck in my head for far too long, i wanted to write action and so i will, story will probably be a one-shot or a two-shot, might even make it a full story if i'm happy with the way i write, got plot fuel for days, but i believe i need to hone my writing skills first, it's been a long time since i've written large texts in english.

So, expect the full one-shot (or the first part of it) on a couple of days, i'm still studying for a couple of exams i have in the uni but i should have enough free time time to finish it by next thuesday, or maybe the next, depends on my agenda.

Anyways, i hope you enjoy the story when it comes out, I might end up doing another couple of one-shots before doing anything big, as I said, my english writing skills are a bit rusty, gotta get the gears going.

Would love some feedback on the preview, even if it's a small thought about how the story should go or how to improve my vocabulary or my writing ability, everything is welcomed by me, i'm somebody that strives to learn and perfect, thank you very much for your time!

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Jun_2388 #1
Chapter 2: What the ....Sejeong...? I didn't expect anything from her and this is what she (Actually) did? ed up...
Poor Chungha T.T
Jwonuu #2
Chapter 1: aw, i thought the romance you wrote was pretty cute tbh
sringlesxx
#3
Chapter 2: Ah, so the original ending was supposed to be Nayoung and Jieqiong dead? Gosh, I was seriously expecting a happy ending in this sequel but it's okay, I liked it. Little did she know.. Chungha was the real victim here.
sringlesxx
#4
Chapter 1: Gosh, this is so complicated. I was like 'Oh my gosh, if only you knew'. I actually didn't expect Sejeong to be a mafia member lol. I can actually picture her pointing a gun towards Nayoung and Pinky while having an eyesmile.
sjch96 #5
Chapter 1: This site is full of NaPink. Period.
I enjoyed this story (skipped most of the NaPink parts) because the friendship and interactions of Nayoung and Chungha is thoroughly engaging.
I wish you could write more about them.. hopefully in the sequel? Thank you.
Won't you write a Sejeong backstory though and why it happened to be like that? I don't empathize with her but I'm curious why she did what she did.
mondchan
#6
Chapter 2: Well bruhh i think it's only a tiny portion fight on the bonus but hence you nailed it! Minkyung seems like a freak killer the one who like playing around n killing w/o mercy and i love that.

Idk but i prefer the first ending tho (not because napink is alive) but more because it's leave me in adrenaline rush more, wanting to know what happens next and also leaving us guessing and wondering what happens next? And that's make it epic and iconic hehe (imo tho)

Thanks for leaving it here you rocccckkk!!
RVFXCookieDough #7
Chapter 1: Woah most intense napink story ever haha