Forbidden

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Title: Forbidden

Authors: Joorin-sshi

Status: On-Going

Tags: Mature, Werewolf, Mates, Shinee, 2min

Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/854998


Personal Opinion


I admit, I've never tried reading something that refers to male couples before, not because of prejudice, but because I didn't think I could relate to the characters. I would like to thank all of your recommendations that include that specific tag because I was and am able to escape my comfort zone and discover beautiful stories, that I would be missing if I stayed there.

I appreciate this story and its author immensely and this is why I will not disclose too much of the story line, but I will advise you to read for yourself. The plot is crafted in such a manner that mystery awaits at every comma, at every dot, at every line of dialog. The story unfolds itself at a steady pace: not too slow and not too fast, letting the character reveal themselves under your own eyes. You begin to see them as they speak, as they act, you get to see them through the eyes of the other characters, through their relationship with them, you begin to question their background and their traits due to the affiliation to a certain species and, at the same time, you spot the differences between their personality and their predefined characteristics. The savor of them as beings comes from the duality of their existence: there aren't any humans to witness the battle of supremacy that is fought between the beasts inside of their head. Some of them inherit different parts of beastly races, some of them just sparsely halves, some are pure blooded royalty, but somehow, they manage to mix together and walk a road to supposedly perdition.

The main characters are driven by different motivations: some by fear, some by love, some by revenge, some by curiosity and some by the weight of their debts and the consequences of their actions, The story doesn't leave you time to be bored: it makes you enter an unknown world - to you and to your characters. The history of their species, the habits, the names, the language and the existence of the characters itself are so well written and so well thought you are often times amazed by the hidden meaning revealed in the story or at the bottom of the page, as an encyclopedia explanation.

Even though the setting is on the border of a fantastic alternate universe, everyone carries a humanly side, although they have lived and thrived for thousands of years, the characters don't speak with the experience they ought to have. The world of their birth is still unknown to them, carrying secrets they wouldn't have dreamt of learning, putting them through journeys they wouldn't have thought to have. This story is about a lot of things: love - both requited and unrequited, sacrifice - both willing and unwilling, fate, soul mates, mates by nature, heartbreaks and loss, supremacy, packs, hoards, magic, etc.

I was swept off my feet. The chapters have the perfect length, the plot incorporates the perfect amount of every genre, the characters are sprinkled with the perfect amount of personality and dipped in the perfect amount of insanity. I wouldn't go back to the time I didn't know about this story and when I didn't wait for its update.

Congratulations!! This story is amazingly detailed and written.

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snow7ys
#1
Hey chinghu..I would like you to review my story
Title: Mr/Miss. Jung
Story Link : http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1203341/mr-miss-jung-comedy-jungyonghwa-parkshinhye-romance-yongshin

Story status: on going

I'll appericate your honest reviews....It would help me to write better stories in future...
Take your time...
Blessed 2017...
SheirynFiya
#2
Hello! Im the author of this humble fic. Do give it a try if you love thriller angst fics :)

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1169236/stranger-danger-action-drama-romance-thriller-exo-baekhyun-jongin
MissMinew
#4
Chapter 1: Name the Story: LoveGame
Link the Story: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1188994/lovegame-key-onew-romance-shinee--onkey-girlee
Give the Main Reason on why you enjoyed it: It's .. uh, it's my story and the reason I like it is very very simple, it's the first and romance story I've ever written and felt was somewhat satisfying. I'm normally an angst-writer and this story was just .. the beginning to new genres for me uwu I really really like it, even if the language is kinda flat. I'm still exploring. (Also, I never thought I would manage to write a story that long without a ton of angst. xD)
RavenUchiha
#5
Chapter 1: Title: Last Song 2 - Song Fic
Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1017665/last-song-2-song-fic-junhyung

This story is based on a Japanese song of the same name "The Last Song" by Japanese singer Gackt. I actually made an original song story without names. This was to promote this story in a story event, that's why it has a 2 next to the name. The Japanese lyrics are at the end of the story, while the translated words are within the story.
worldofmyown
#6
Chapter 1: Hi. First off I wanted to say this is really nice of you. It's a cute idea! And you've kinda inspired me I can do something nice on AFF on Christmas myself, didnt give too much thought before.
Next I wanna submit something :3 thanks for the chance.
1. The Quick, The Dead and the Divine
2. I'm gonna put the link in a reply to my comment, my phone is not letting me paste right... lol weird
3. This is actually my own story so imma tell you why I enjoyed writing it. Actually it's a strange one, I was inspired during my cultural analysis class in university. And also inspired by the aesthetics of Humanoid by TVXQ. I wanted to explore the notion of the fourth dimension, and it was waaay more challenging than I first anticipated, because conceptualising 4d when your brain works in 3d is really hard xD
I hope you enjoy it ^^
Joorin-sshi
#7
Chapter 5: Oh... wow.
Honestly, I don't even know what to say in response to your review. I'm truly amazed, I wasn't expecting such a positive response, to be honest. Thank you so much! You have no idea how much it means to me and I'm extremely happy that you enjoyed Forbidden so much!
This actually fuels my will to keep thriving to make this story worth it. Really, thank you from the bottom of my heart! <3
kitana
#8
Title: The Sins of Kim Hanbin
Link : http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1085610/the-sins-of-kim-hanbin-bigbang-gdragon-romance-winner-hanbin-bobby-ikon

This is not written by me but I honestly think this author needs more recognition! This is my favourite Hanbin fanfics ^^