Quiet Night

Description

Just a chat between dongseng and hyung, a little music and some dance on the roof of YGE.

Foreword

Title: Quiet Night
Author: Atenais
Rating: G
Length: One-shot
Words: 1923
Pairings: GTOP (SeungHyun/JiYong)
Genre: Canon, Fluff
Beta: boojaejongie (I can’t thank you enough for your help) and aislinoriel (she's an angel).
Disclaimer: Unfortunately, these boys don't belong to me. But the story certainly is the fruit of my imagination.
Warning: Since I’m a non-native English speaker this must have a lot of mistakes.
Version: Portuguese/Spanish
Curiosity: The song I mentioned in this fic is Love In December, by Club 8.
A/N: I dedicate this fic to my dear friend, Boo, who initiated me into the world. Boo, I could never imagine that one day I would write my own fic. And this fic can't be compared with the great fics from this fandom.
My first fic, criticism is welcome, but, please, be gentle.

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Latenight #1
Chapter 1: I love it,I love more when these two lovely boys in fluffy yet deep story like this..
bonezz #2
Chapter 1: sequel pls authornim XD
yourfans #3
Chapter 1: wow.. this is sooo love ly, sweet cute.. and more...
please update*
^^
Jeezfiction #4
Chapter 1: That was really lovely. I like the way you write, like the situation easily could be real.
MsNightshade #5
Chapter 1: Oh, this is beautiful!!! So sweet and innocent and lovely and OHHHHH!!! I want to roll around in this loveliness. ^___^ Thank you!
fangirlisfan #6
Chapter 1: I love this. Love the way you capture emotions in a scene. Thank you.
didoe84 #7
Chapter 1: I saw some of your comment on other fics & I find you interesting so I go to see if You write yourself & found that jewel of fic!! I really like how the story evolve at Re pace of a sweet song!! & all the feelings more implied that really expressed as they are in the fic!! Really Nice!!
IbbyluvsGTOP #8
Chapter 1: After I read this one-shot, I simply don't understand how come you say you're bad and the fact that you decided to quit. This is way too beautiful and perfect to be true.
You took a simple encounter on the rooftop and a simple action (dancing)and you turned it into something fabulous and so pure and beautiful. It was breathakingly sweet and it touched my heart because it was so sincere and not once over-the-top. I hope you get into that mind of yours that you're awesome and come back to the writing world; it needs people with your talent. :)

Regards!!!
annakaoya #9
Chapter 1: *__*
Brilliant! You're so good at writing! And English isn't your first language... Wow. Thank you for sharing this wonderful story <3
Please keep writing!~
PurpleDragon120 #10
Chapter 1: I loved this fic! It was very well written and the simplicity of the story and portrayal of the characters made it seem very honest and believable.
Keep up the good work :)
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