Chapter 1: This is so beautiful omg ;; I love how you connected their feelings with traffic during the confession, I loved all other used of figurative language it's all so beautiful. It really took my breath away. My favorite line must have been when you wrote "he watches as their fingers lace together, far from a perfect fit...but he still loves how it feels" just because it gives me so many emotions. It threw me off because usually people say "its a perfect fit" but really when I read that my heart melted omg it's lovely this is so lovely
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