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open┊ accepting┊ ~~closed~~┊~~hiring~~

A review shop made to encourage and enlighten authors all over this site with their stories, characters and even down to their choice of words. Moon Child does not merely review, it extends helps to those who seek for it in terms of writing and the like.

RULES ;

o1. Please subscribe first. This is so you can monitor and see if your request is pending, on-going or finished. You may unsubscribe after. Upvotes are welcomed with open arms. <3

o2. Before requesting, send karma to choi-taek (me) as a method of payment. Oneshots, twoshots and threeshots cost 3 karma. Stories with four (4) to twelve (12) chapters cost 4 karma points. Stories thirteen (13) chapters and above cost 5 karma points.

o3. Do not bash or in any way, verbally harm/bully the reviewer. The reviewer is only doing her job by giving you a detailed review full of constructive criticism that will eventually help you in your path towards a writer/author.

o4. Stories with themese and genres such as boyxboy, girlxgirl, , yuri, horror and gore are not allowed. Request for a review elsewhere.

o5. Please credit the shop in your story's foreword. We will be checking. Use this image when crediting; x.

o6. To ensure you've read the rules, the password is the name of your female bias.

failure to follow any of the rules will result to the requestor being blacklisted

REQUEST FORM ;
comment it below

username:
story title:
short summary:
story link:
characters:
genre:
graded or non-graded review:
password:

RUBRICS ;

*graded reviews are reviews that will follow a point system and will review based to score your work; for every error or dissatisfaction the reviewer finds in your work, she will deduct a point from the overall total score.

*non-graded reviews focus more on criticism, comments, suggestions, recommendations and the like. The reviewer can give more critiques here.

story title (5/5)

description (5/5)

writing style (20/20)

grammar and spelling (15/15)

characterization (15/15)

plot (20/20)

flow of the story (10/10)

overall enjoyment (10/10)

REQUEST LIST ;
username / story title / status

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NamStarKaebbsong #1 Apr 7, 2020 21:58:39

i'm guessing if my story is not published i can't request or am i wrong?

shesamytheu #2 Jul 6, 2017 13:06:21

username: shesamytheu

story title: Reboot

short summary: Gain has gotten herself in trouble and is assigned to be the school band's manager as a form of punishment. She is not pleased. Kyungsoo shares the sentiment, but he's too ambitious to let his feelings cloud his objective.

story link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1057902/

characters: Do Kyungsoo, Lee Gain (OC)

genre: Romance, Slice of life, Comedy (+ friendships + family)

graded or non-graded review: Graded

password: Kim Taeyeon

Thanks in advance!

samasbananas #3 Mar 21, 2017 06:07:18

username: samasbananas
story title: Reunions Are Stupid

short summary: Reunions are hard for everybody. Having to live up to the expectation of success that your former classmated place on you is not fun. But high school reunions are harder for people who still aren't over their high school love. Unfortunately, you fall into this category. Now, 5 years after you'd said goodbye to Park Jinyoung for good, it's time for you to face him again at your stupid high school reunion.

story link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1084552/reunions-are-stupid-jinyoung-romance-you-got7
characters: You/Reader, GOT7's Jinyoung
genre: reader insert, fluff, romance
graded or non-graded review: graded
password: Chaeyoung

DozenDunkinDonuts #4 Jan 22, 2017 20:26:51

username: DozenDunkinDonuts
story title: Symptoms of Being Homo Sapien
short summary: 6 months. 13 banks. Infiltrated. All were branches of the SK Bank. All cases with a message left behind. It wasn't the money or the notoriety he was after. Nor the wild goose chase he started for the police. Jung Hoseok wanted revenge. And he was going to get it. //
Lee Jaemin was broke. She knew better than to dig through her pockets for loose change when all that would surface back were dustbunnies. Determined to pay for her precious ramen (and apartment), Jaemin finds herself backstage at the renowned Cirque du Seoul.
Wearing clown shoes.
story link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1185700/symptoms-of-being-homo-sapien-hiatus-action-angst-romance-originalcharacter-bts-bangtan-bangtansonyeondan
characters: J-Hope (Hoseok), Jaemin (OC), Areum (OC), and BTS
genre: Action, Romance
graded or non-graded review: non-graded
password: Taeyeon

11thPhilanthropist #5 Jan 7, 2017 19:26:20

username: 11thPhilanthropist
story title: Be My Last Breath
short summary: You lost him. You lost him a long time ago. You've lost the only person who could make you feel the ecstatic moment of the sky and the earth colliding into one to create a wave of blissfulness. It was your selfishness that made Min Yoongi walk out of your life. Forever. You have always valued your pride. Yet when things go spiraling out of control, would you still hold up your walls or would you finally gather the courage to change your fate? Would you dare look for the boy you abandoned or would you rather choose to be a coward-afraid of the future and ashamed of the past?
story link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1194623/be-my-last-breath-angst-romance-you-yoongi-bts-suga
characters: Suga x You
genre: Romance and angst
graded or non-graded review: Graded
password: LALISA

mistressdean #6 Jan 6, 2017 13:55:10

username: mistressdean
story title: The Definition of Jungkook
short summary: Minhee expects all secrets to be trivial like "I once went a whole day without wearing underwear." Little does she know Jungkook's secret is far from any reality she imagined.
story link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/968946
characters: Jungkook & Minhee
genre: friendship, family, fluff, comedy
graded or non-graded review: nongraded
password: CL

P.S I will send bonus points after the review is done :)

snowblush #7 Dec 27, 2016 07:01:13

username: snowblush
story title: SCARS
short summary: Three boys with different backgrounds were meant to be the future of a kingdom.

They didn’t know what power they possessed, they didn’t know how strong they are and they didn’t know how dangerous they are until they found the reasons behind their scars. The scars that tells everything; the entire story.
story link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1206539/scars-fantasy-exo-bap-baekhyun-daehyun-bts-taehyung
characters: kim taehyung, byun baekhyun, jung daehyun
genre: fantasy
graded or non-graded review: just do what ever you're comfortable with :)
password: Lee Hi

suzandaou #8 Nov 25, 2016 16:47:46

username : suzandaou
story title: Trapped Souls
a summary: a story about two person who are obsessed with each other , but the thing is that girl thinks that she want to escape because he is way to obsessed with her. until she realize that she is the one who started this .

story link : http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1196737/trapped-souls-hardcore-oneshot-kimjonginandoc-kai000oc

characters: kimjongin/ OC

gener: hard core , romance , dark
graded review
Hyuna

MovedGirl #9 Nov 13, 2016 16:28:34

username: MovedGirl
story title: Hormone War
short summary: Hoshi Kim Seok is moving at the famous Seoul city. She wants her dreams to become true, but that's not going to happen so easily. She is going to live with her brother Jin for a while, at least that's what she thought until she opened the door to find 6 more boys forming the complete BTS group. Dealing with seven guys wouldn't be easy right? But she'll have to deal with the whole 'Hormone War' that's about to happen.
story link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1129531/hormone-war-angst-drama-romance-struggle-bts-bangtangboys
characters: All BTS members + Hoshi (oc)
genre: angst, drama, romance
graded or non-graded review: non-graded
password: Hyuna

Inspiration77 #10 Nov 7, 2016 09:33:02

Chapter 1: yyyyeepppp this was really helpful. =D
i know i have to improve a lot and i am going to try my best! thank you for the review, i finally know what I have to correct. i will be crediting the story with the shop banner but just so u know, i am going to keep the story drafted for a while because i want to make changes, so that the next time u stumble upon my story, you get hooked right away! thank you so much! :))))))