i think the story is not that bad ^_^ , it still sweet though and so cliche which is my favourite *giggle* keep on working ,i'm sure your writing will get better ! the one that i always never bored to read is when yunho always madly fall in love with his jaejoong for the first time and jaejoong always blushing so madly when his yunho is looking at him kekekekek

wow love love this, Yun's so cute, and so as Jae, the'yre both inlove with each other as in yes hehehe i believe Jae's falling for Yun ^-^ the first one was sad Yun lovet his umma but the good thing was god sent him someone that'll make Yun forget the pain and that was Jae and then they met again and became friends they're really cute, wonder what'll happen next, curious much to Jae's bro... sis good job with this, i don't know why you said you dont have confidence with your story, this is really great, good job sis, keep it up, looking forward to the next one, please update soon, hwaiting!!! ^-^

finally, an update! Yey! ヘ(^_^ヘ)(ノ^_^)ノ
it's really good. i wonder who is jae's bro.
sunkyu for update! ^^

i will, right now~ please don't made at me ..cause the story i made is based on what i read about yunjae love story for 6 moths^^

keep on checking ok^^.. i'm so sorry.. please forgive me. i'm such a bad author~

sound interesting...
when will u update the story?