closest to heaven (i'll ever be)

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like all lost boys, baekhyun has started with a dream.

 

 

title: closest to heaven (i'll ever be)
pairing: chanyeol/baekhyun (mentions of jongin/baekhyun, jongin/sehun, jongin/luhan
rating: r
genre: mafia?????
warning(s): implied human trafficking, mentions of and gun play, drug use, implied master/slave relationship, implied character death, the author has no idea what shes writing!!
word count: 5,648

 

 

Foreword

 

Nimble fingers Baekhyun’s shirt from the top, and when they try to do something more, Baekhyun stops them. “Who knows if I’ll be inside that cage someday?” He throws the hand away from him in contempt. “Right now, I’m not a bed slave for you so you better keep those hands to yourself before I shoot each finger off their knuckles.”

Baekhyun draws his revolver as if to prove a point, but Chanyeol just chuckles, raising both hands.

“Just saying." There's a smirk playing on Chanyeol's lips. "Because I’d be the first to buy you out of that cage, if ever.”

 

 


this wouldn't be a fic if muriel wasnt with me T^T and alsoooooo, iris by goo goo dolls (yall prob heard that song) was the main song for this fic lol

this was written when lotto was released, and i actually finished it two days later. but i wasnt satisfied and wanted to improve it but we had exams and school was so ty for me that this got buried. and now i'm totally lost ?? i forgot what i wanted to add into this. it never improved so i'm publishing it to clean my drafts, what an awful reason orz

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ssarieca
#1
Chapter 1: Goddammit. I did not notice that I was already at the end of the chapter!! Damn it. Chanyeol, you promised that you're gonna free him from his cage :(
Jonginwhore #2
Chapter 1: Ohmygosh. I've been reading your works and I'd like to thank you for being such a good writer!
Jadkiki30 #3
Noooooooo chanyeol!!!!!
Lovely story... Absolutely beautiful... I'm just gonna run around screaming for a while!!!
LOEYs-L
#4
Goddamnit why must all chanbaek stories posted on my bday end like this asdfghjklpnhgd
I should die too ㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠ
Gonna wail rn till my voice ran out
harahazitis
#5
Chapter 1: How foolish of me to hope for a happy ending out of this fic :") u did well author nim..u killed me...bye..
yehet_pcy #6
why mUST YOU DO THIS I WANTED CHANYEOL TO LIVE I WANTED BAEK TO ESCAPE I WANTED YEOL TO KILL BAEK I DIDNT WANT BAEK TO GET CAUGHT TO GET BACK TO BE KILLED TOO IM CRYING YEOL ONLY WANTED TO SAVE BAEK I DIDNT WANT THIS TO HAPPEN IM GONNA :((((((((((
i know this was all in the theme and it was foolish of me to even think really that theyd actually end up being free but :((((((((((((
I know this is kinda messed up but i have to admit i really really love that baek belongs to jongin and their line of business and stuff was just TTTT AND I LOVE THAT BAEK THOUGHT YEOL WAS IN THAT KIND OF BUSINESS TOO BUT IT TURNS OUT THAT :((((((( ok wow i cant get over how tragic this is why couldnt they just :((((( you know the ony consolation i can get here is at least baek thought he knew what love was and that it would be worth dying for. As a reader in left to my own devices to come up with an ending and id rather baek die right then and there with yeol than have jongin punishing him :(((((((((((( im sorry huhuhuhu
but really this was a really gold idea and what a great au too i love this fic i love how dark it is and how hopeful i was and then that ending just shattered all of that. Ill cry. Thanks so very much for writing and sharing!!!!!! TTTTT
ps my most favorite scene would either be when yeol was saying that first time that he would buy baek out if he were a slave, or that time in yeols car when baek was offering himself to yeol and yeol didnt.... ah..... and that scene when yeol called baek baby when he gave him wine. Im gonna cry baek wouldve found genuine happiness and yeol i cant believe they took this away from him
Ok runs away bYE
mayday16 #7
one side: i dont dare to read it again bcs my stomach felt like it was twisted bcs of the last part. Whyyyyy park chanyellllll (intended) whyyyyyyyy *ugly sobbing*
Other side: i wanna read it again bcs it fulfills my thirst for angstttttt TT all elements of angst that i need are here TT
catielenz #8
Chapter 1: i love one shots but still it drives me nuts that there is no ending. really good job i love it