who's jealous now

Falling for One-Date Guy
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Her ex texts her and she texts back. Technically, they’re friends, coming from the same group of friends in college. But, it’s their cycle. Whenever he has problems or breaks up with his new girlfriends, he would go to Krystal. Not that she minded. They don’t flirt anymore. Although he denies texting her only when he’s troubled, he actually shares his problems about the girls with her. She has to admit that when it happened before, she was glad of the attention especially of the fact that he always goes back to her. But now, she regards it as a merely friendly thing to do.

 

Amber, Luna, and Krystal meet at a nearby café where Minhyuk will pick them up to watch Yonghwa’s gig. Automatically, Krystal rides shotgun. Minhyuk immediately asks Luna about the recent test they took (the competitive kid) and then exchanges jokes with Amber. Krystal laughs with them.

 

The car fell silent as they moved so Minhyuk the radio. Luna and Amber jammed to the songs while Minhyuk just kept stealing glances at Krystal. She doesn’t notice, of course, since she was busy texting with her ex and Victoria (who is planning her 1st monthsary celebration to surprise Nichkhun).

 

Her ex sends a picture of ticket passes to a wall-climbing center. She’s excited. They were classmates in their wall-climbing PE in college (They didn't meet there. Also, they were broken up then.) And she’s actually quite good at this sport. They schedule their wall-climbing session next Saturday, his treat.

 

Yonghwa and his band did great – Krystal became a fan in an instant. They had drinks after but Minhyuk was unusually quiet. Occasionally, his brows are furrowed but when asked, he would just shrug it off as mere “stress from med school.”

 

As per usual, Minhyuk sends them home. When only the two of them were left in the car, Krystal speaks up.

“Are you tired? You’re unusually quiet.”

Minhyuk answers without

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HotPotatoSweetPotato #1
Chapter 8: This is the cutest thing. Just the right amount of fluff, the emotions are spot on. The flow is smooth, nowhere too dragging. All that you said about this being your first multi-chapter etc you did really well. 🎉
missmatilda
#2
Chapter 8: So sweet.. how i wish it was longer.. Thank you for a nice short read authornim. i love it.
000521
#3
oh my god ; ;; ;
Anding2810 #4
Chapter 8: Fluffy and cute, simply love it ❤️
FEBRUARY24 #5
Chapter 8: There is not so much Hyukstal story nowadays so I rarely check the tag and I end up missing this one. I like this one, short and sweet. The fact that it's a close up of real life events make me love it more. I'll surely be waiting for your fic in the future. Thanks for this amazing fic.
alammonayan
#6
Chapter 8: Awww.... it already comes to its end... im gonna miss hyukstal as ur characters... xD although it seems too fast... i like its ending and i like how u just captured a part of their life where they met and how they fall in love... i like the way how u not elaborate much on the story and gives ur reader the imagination on what happened on their dates but it also frustrates me because i want to read hyukstal stories... :( anyway thank you for this hyukstal ff... i hope ull write abt them in the near future... xD fighting! :)
valierrie
#7
Chapter 7: This is the best short chapter i have ever encounter.
First, the fact that minhyuk feels like kang minhyuk in real life is all over the place. Especially where he confessed about him ask Luna for a permission. I can fell that minhyuk will do that too to soojung if they're really dating. Not so shy and very playful indeed.

And soojung is just adorably cute. Her inner thoughts brought a fresh feeling throughout the entire story. Because she's insecure about this popular dude. Can she manage to keep a straight face is he's becoming unexpected. The soojung here is my favorite
tartytorts
#8
Chapter 7: Ok I started reading this today and I loveeeeee this story. Your chapters a short (please make them a bit longer) but your story pacing is on point!!
I love the characters that you have created:D
Btw what does he mean by the one date guy and permission to date? I didn't get that part.
Also a little suggestions to make your awesome chapters even better, try to separate dialogues from sentences so they make better sense in the context.
alammonayan
#9
Chapter 7: Hahaha... i like how minhyuk teases krystal abt the nickname she gave to him.... xD and lunas slip of the tongue... xD i also like guys who ask for permission from ur friends to go out with u because its much more less hassle... xD i mean if ur frwnds so u together with this guy theyll constantly nag you abt him but when the guy ask permission from ur squad thats it... hahaha... xD thank you and will wait for the nxt chapter... xD