HAUNTED / CAST REVEALED

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haunted
 
by cosmos_
haunted

what happens after you die?

it's a question asked by many. is your soul reincarnated? do you pass on to heaven, or perhaps hell? do you just close your eyes and drift out of existence?

the answer? yes. some souls reincarnate; some souls go to heaven or hell; some just stop existing. but some souls - restless souls who didn't feel that they did enough during their time on earth - remain bound to the mortal world without the benefit of a body. they wander aimlessly, only able to visit places they've already been, waiting for the closure they need to go to the afterlife they believe in.

one such hub for lost souls is geumjanhwa high school, founded in 1960. it's been infamously unlucky - one student at least has died every year since its operation. most of these souls have passed on, but four of them have not; they roam the school, looking for closure.

also at geumjanhwa is the much-maligned occult club. currently consisting of a whopping four students, these kids are determined to find evidence of the paranormal at their school. throughout all their years of operation, they haven't had much luck, but this year, they're determined to find out the truth. 

cosmos_
  HAUNTED / honestly? i'm not happy with these, but knowing where these kids go from here is soothing my pain a little. ch. 1 is in progress.

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kanqwu
#1
Chapter 1: OMFG IM SO SORRY IM SO LATE
but im here now and ready to (finally) comment

ok so jooyoung is an interesting character all on his own, but you really preyed on the mental process of him- something that i really love to see. observing how someone's mind works is one just a really good perspective and his is one that stands in its own spotlight because of his memory loss. i liked the tranquil feeling of his drabble as well.

jihwan's drabble is quiet, nostalgic, easy and uneasy. i think what i find to put me at ease with this one is the whole "city in the early hours" kind of deal. it's a different sort of calm than the usual calm. but his gaps in his memory and personal unrest make you feel unease as well.

i never got around to reading sooah's application, so this drabble is a really nice warm welcome to her character ! she sounds like such a sweet girl, and this drabble is the kind of thing you know the janitor will be telling to his buddies "i swear there was a girl here-" kind of campfire tale.

i didn't read about haneul either - rip. but i like the contrast between her and sooah's actions and behavior. idk if the placement of the two beside each other is intentional or not, but it really is such a great play at opposites that it highlights both girls rather nicely. haneul seems like an interesting character, much different from the others. i think i'll like her a lot ;;

(1/2 .. see rest in replies)
kanqwu
#2
Chapter 1: just want you to know that i've read these but i haven't had the time to word a proper response. that will come soon !

but i will say i loved them and i thought it was a great introduction to all of the characters !!
koganes #3
Chapter 1: ok im back, and still half-asleep so sorry if i sound far from coherent lmfao


these!! teasers!! have!! me!! feeling!! emo!!
jooyoung's drabble fits him to a t; you've managed to encapsulate his essence in a single paragraph--kudos to u!!
all these drabbles were honestly?? so nice to read. esp sooah's. idk i really like her character because she's so?? soft!! i want to protect & love her 4ever.
if anything, these drabbles have only heightened my hype for the first chapter ;; im really excited to see what you'll do with the cast! hype levels to the max lmfao

(also.. jooyoung stop bugging jihwan so much ,, let My Boi love [just kidding. i live n breathe to see jooyoung pestering jihwan to no end])
Layni17
#4
Chapter 1: Okay so like I'm screaming.
Bless Sooah's little soul- Well, literally I guess.
Honestly same Jinho. XD And Ancheol.
/dies because I'm late for school
These were seriously beautiful drabbles, don't worry about anything! I love enjoyed them a lot. Good luck writing chapter one!
moongkeul
#5
Chapter 1: i lOVE these drabbles -- i feel like you grasped the most prominent features of each character in order to show us what theyre really about and you did a great job s kreams

im loving oh jinho by the way ?? shes so scary i love : ))
floored
#6
Chapter 1: lies down all these little drabbles are going to like
help me survive this week tbh
ALSO HAHAHA jinho creeping tf out of her classmates always makes me amused idek
will add a more in depth comment that talks about the other drabbles when i get home!!! (will be in reply to this!)
koganes #7
Chapter 1: the drabbles!! they're finally here!!
long comment to come tomorrow when im not half-asleep :-)

(let me just say. im dead already thnk u 4 this)
koganes #8
@ your feed:
me up !!