I loved you first

Description

 

It's strange how fast life passes by, one minute you're an youngster who has the whole world before his feet and the other minute you're an old man wondering how life would've turned out if different choices had been made. This is a story about love, firendship, betrayla and redemption. 


 

Foreword

Sooo, Hello there! :D 

I think this is gonna be quite a long story, and for now I've written about 3 chapters. 

English isn't my firts language as you guys might understand, but I will try to hold a good standrad when it comes to grammar and spelling. 

Also, I study at a univers which means that my time for writing sadly is limited. I do find it very fun and relaxing though, so I will try to upload as often as possible.

Aaaand ofc... I LOVE the Eunhae pairing and now when their both in the army I need to get out my Eunhae-feelings in som kind of way :P 
 

 

Feel free to give some constructive criticism, since english, as I stated before, isn't my first language I would love to get som feedback at the text so I can adjust my writing! 

Enjoy! (Or not ;)

 

 

 

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layan987
#1
Chapter 6: dont be sorry,of cours your study more important than anything else,thanks alot for the nice chapter.:-):-)
mikimary #2
This is so heartwarming and good.
Your writing is good that prove you're such a talented writing.
At first i dont want to read this because its seem too angst and surely have a sad ending but i try to read one chapter and it's totally me in. It's make me overwhelming with emotion and didnt fail to make me cry.
Good job for you for creating such a beautiful story. Cant wait to read more of this. Actually reading this make me think of my life.
layan987
#3
Chapter 5: I hope i could tell you about my feelings when i read your story,its really an amazing story,i cant wait to know thier story&i hope its not asad love story,thanks soooo much for the updating dear author.
kpoplover0809 #4
Chapter 5: Thank u for updating:)
kpoplover0809 #5
Chapter 4: I love this so muchT-T
layan987
#6
Chapter 2: I really love this chapter,its so sweet,t thanks alot for the updating.
Cloudnine7 #7
Chapter 1: The pov is refreshing, hhhhhhhhh it always good to find some new eunhae fics, fighting authornim !!
layan987
#8
Chapter 1: wow,it looks sooo intersting story,I hope you will update so soon,thanks for the updating,