Review done on January 13, 2017 for Bubbly G. S.

Username: _fduptricks

Story Title + Link: Low Tolerance + https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1078754/low-tolerance-fluff-oneshot-exo-jongin-kyungsoo-kaisoo

Story Description: After having a cliche break up with his boyfriend, Kyungsoo now finds himself again under the refuge of his best friend Jongin with a big bag of fried chicken and two bottles of tequila.

Story Genre(s): , Mature

Main Characters + Supporting Characters: Kyungsoo Do and Jongin Kim

Title (8/10): As cute as the title is, I don't think it matches. Neither of them seem to be drunk enough not to remember what the two of them just did.

Characterization (5/10): Since there are basically only two characters, I only gave you whole points on Jongin. I feel like you took more time to describe his character whereas with Kyungsoo I saw little effort.

Themes (2/10): I took off a lot of points because this has absolutely nothing to do with fluff. I'm pretty sure you would end up scaring a person who was looking for fluff. Don't include themes that really don't apply to your story because it's misleading.

Setting (4/10): Your setting was way too vague and out of place. There were times that I didn't understand it all. For example, for Jongin to be able to hear the doorbell in his shower from probab