Review done on January 29, 2017 for Bubbly G.S.

Username: Queenchul-Min

Story title + Story Link: It's This Way + http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1180037/it-s-this-way-jihope-violenceandgore-bottomhoseok

Story Description: Jung Hoseok has grown up on the streets, in fear of the dreaded Park family, trying to lay low and avoid notice. Yet... Park Jimin has taken an unusual interest in Hoseok, and it's not good. Through the years of pain and fear, Hoseok comes to realize that he is falling, head over heels, for his tormentor... the very enemy that he is trying to destroy. Jimin always has his arms open for Hoseok to run into, but it's becoming too much for Hoseok to take. Jimin is the enemy. He must fight the enemy. He must kill Jimin before Jimin kills him. 

Genre: Violence, Angst, Fantasy/Supernatural, and Dark

Main Character(s) + Supporting Character(s): Hoeseok and Jimin + BTS

Title (00/10): You’re title is kind of bland. It’s not very eye catching at all. 

Characterization (00/10): You’re not really making any characterization. I understand that there are only two chapters so far but there is no real development of the character. You don’t give any background on Hoseok like who he is, where he came from, where his parents are, etc. This really degrades him as a main character because there’s no meat on the character that the readers can leave with an impression of being intrigued. As for Jimin, he’s supposed to be a main character right? The way you’re describing hi