This is one unique storyline that you have here and you got me all hook. It's ironic that you titled the chapter rational because Mina is anything but... I enjoy reading how you portrayed her here, she still kept that signature Mina coolness but at the same time you could see her losing all sense of sanity at the thought of Momo going out on a date with someone else. Even if Momo wasn't in the chapter, I'm excited to meet the fluffball already. You wrote her in a way that makes you want to take care of her. She cries in movies and the jelly cup situation, she needs someone who will pamper her and Mina looks like she's ready to take on the job. I'm looking forward to see Momo going on dates but more of seeing how Mina would react, would she go cray? would she try to sabotage it? Hahahaha... I'm eager to see what you have in store. Keep up the great work, author, I will definitely be on a look out for the next chapter.
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