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reviews
kang sarang
( blue / senior / kihyun's plotline / accepted )
review ) : hi blue! first of all, thank you for being my first applicant! i really enjoyed your app, and i didn't find any mistakes so this won't be a long review ^^; the fact that she's coach kang's granddaughter is really cool, and the fact that she's a swimmer originally is nice too. if she was chosen, she could be the captain since she actually knows about the sport vs almost everyone else who knows very little. i like that you chose kihyun for her love interest, and i'm sorry but i laughed so much at how they met. her poor nose! so to end this properly,
kang sarang is accepted! 
yoo haeyeon
( rey / freshman / hyungwon's plotline / accepted )
review ) : hi rey! there were no mistakes in your app, so this review will be kind of short as well. the gifs of umji were so cute! i love how you made a girl from one of the girliest girl groups out there into a tomboy, that's really cool. she's a daddies girl! that's so cute. good lord, her mother signed her up for it? that's gotta . i feel bad for poor haeyeon. i liked her interview section, and i can picture her being the whiner if she gets chosen ^^ oh my gosh! she punched him when he woke her up, that's so funny! i gotta say, the love interest section was one of my favorite parts of haeyeon's app. and thus,
yoo haeyeon is accepted!
han jaeyi
( vivian / freshman / hoseok's plotline / accepted )
review ) : hi vivi! (is it ok if i call you that?) jaeyi's app was perfect, i enjoyed reading it so much! your review will also be short because there weren't any mistakes (jeez you guys are on point with your apps!) i absolutely loved how much you explained everything, and especially the part on how her parents' divorce affected her. her relationship with hoseok was super cute, and the "Grape juice" part made me laugh so hard. overall, jaeyi's app was perfect, so that means,
han jaeyi is accepted! 

*as a side note, thank you so much for helping me with the layout!!!
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softymochi
#1
Chapter 3: im such a forgetful person , i forgot you reviewed my character yikEs
but im glad u liked her (':
but i remembered when doing the app i thougt coach kang was born in '87 not 87 years old lololol
spontaneity
#2
Chapter 3: oh and i'd prefer u just call me viv LOOL
spontaneity
#3
Chapter 3: ooh i didn't realize the reviews were out already haha
thank you for the review! and i'm glad you had fun reading the app ^^
also glad there were no errors LOL
and no problem with the layout, really!
--vikseu
#4
i just have to say this, the gifs are so cUTE GAHHH!
nephesh
#5
Chapter 2: Damn
87 means he's born in 1929-1930
He's almost two decades older than the oldest teacher in my school
joa-yo
#6
i'm all in for monsta x apply fics oh my dear !!!!
a ND HOLY I SEE THOSE FREE! GIFS!!!!!!!!!!
spontaneity
#7
Chapter 2: the teacher is 87 wth?!!??!?!?
dude must be in hella good shape LOOL
cause who else is gunna teach the kids who can't swim, to swim

i'll be applying with a love interest way XDD
but from personal experience, "love relationships" don't always happen in high school xD
two of my closest friends didn't even have a single crush in the 4 yrs we were in school
and i had one for like a yr but that was it xD
guess it depends on the school LOOL
bapoverflowers
#8
Chapter 1: besides the swim concept
this seems really similar
to another monsta x applyfic
that just finished picking apps
idk, it may just be me ???

not being rude at all
best of luck to you ^^
spontaneity
#9
Chapter 1: "heard there was ramyun"
"joined cause hyunwoo smiled at her"
"almost got expelled for his mixtape"

LMAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
THESE R GOLD