The One That Got Away

Description

In another life

I would be your girl

We keep all our promises

Be us against the world

In another life

I would make you stay

So I don't have to say

You were the one that got away

The one that got away.

 

           Katy Perry's The one that got away.

Foreword

This is my first fic. Please support me and comment.

Let me know my mistake .

 I'm so busy these days cuz i have tutors now so this fic is un-beta,so there will be mistakes.

English is not my first language so if i did abuse your language please forgive me.

I will try harder next time.

Thank you .

please leave a comment if you've read my fic.idc even if it 3 or 4 or 5 words just comment!please?!?

Comments

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EunHeeLeex3 #1
Anna. ARE YOU ING KIDDING ME!?!?! THAT WAS AWESOME!!OMG I LOVED IT SO MUCH!!HOW CAN YOU SAY IT´S A FAIL!?!!??!?!OMG THIS WAS SO SAD!!!AND BEAUTIFUL!!Q_______Q MY FIC IS SO MUCH MORE BAD THAN YOURS!!YYOURS I NOT BAD AT ALL!!!OMGSO ANGSTY AND SAD !!!!Q_________________Q THEY HAD SUCH A WONDEFUL TIME TOGETEHR AND ALL THIS GOT DESTROYED BCOS OF THAT GUY ;A;!!!!AKSJDHKAHSDKJHASDKHAK NOOO!!!

The couch scenes and such were so damn cute and sweet!! omg...
HAHAH LO!!8DD ON THE COUCH!!THAT IS LOVE!!OMG YOU SHOULD WRITE IT XDDD

HyunJoong. Can I ing kill this guy?. JKSHDKJASHDKHAKHDKJ THIS BASTARD!!!SKJAHDASKHK YOU !!ONLY BCOS OF YOU!!IF NOT THEY WOULD BE HAPPY TOGETEHR NOW!!AS A MARRIED COUPLE!!KASJDHKJASHKDHA YOU ASSSSSSS!!!!!*gets knife*

WUUAH THE FACT THAT KYU WAS HOLDING THOSE RINGS EVEN WITHOUT STRENGTH IS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOO SAAAAAAAAAAD!!!Q__________Q SAKJDHAKSJHDKSJAHBUHWUIABDKSJBD OMG MINNIE!!T_________T

OMG OMG OMG YOU!!!HOW DARE YOU TO LIE TO ME!!Q3Q!? THIS WAS AWESOME!! I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!!!
AND NO THERE ARE NOT MUCH GRAMMAR MISTAKES AND ALL!!KJSADHASDKH SO MUCH BETTER THAN MINE!!!OKAY!?

WRITE MORE!!WRITE MORE!!WRITE MORE!!YOU HAVE THE TALENT FOR IT!!KSJADHJAS

SARANGHAE!!!

With much love,
vivi<3
yesung_wookie
#2
so sad/./......
kyumin.sad story
hcmusicah
#3
Oh my gosh! So sad....<br />
But I loved it a lot <3 Love KyuMin :)
RaddaUghh
#4
This was actually really good! ^^ Sad too. I'm not really into one-shots, but I loved it ^^ You should keep writing! I'd love to read more from you~
rizzorin #5
i love it!~ heheheheh!~
bedhairrrr #6
LOVED IT!
ChoomNami
#7
wahhh so good. Listening to the song and reading it makes me want to cry.
Eagle_V #8
erhhhhhhhh...Looking at the clock...It's 943am right now, it's still in morning and you make me cry ??? Why ??? Your fic is good :D. Keep going ok. I have to go to school with swollen eye LOL
valyneda
#9
like it,but i was crying my soul out! wait for to continue with a new life reunion, kiss you!