Eiguh-Ht & Dad ~ From Nook to Cranny ~

Description

This is a story about a Son who wants his Dad to be the Hero he envisions him to be, taking a whole adventure just to realise he always was.

Foreword

When Winter hits their home, threatening their survival, Father & Son reluctantly, and eagerly, set off on a Journey to a mythical place they can only hope exists. With everyone talking about it and leaving in search of it, the two hope to start a new life in an easier world, but the Journey is the hardest challenge they'll ever have to face, discovering what their made of and who they are.

 

 

Type: Novel

Genre: Adventure

Audience: Teen

Rating: Mild, PG12

Tone: Bitter Sweet

Chapter Length: 15 Roughly.

 

 

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Gehrel #1
Chapter 3: Some minor typos. Overall, this is Chapter is coherent and concise. However, I am confused on Niddlo and Patty. Are they friends of Eiguh'Ht or simply something else altogether?
Gehrel #2
Chapter 2: Reading through this, it is nice to get a glimpse of the community that Eiguh'Ht and his father lives in, or rather a past version of it. Also, the whole chapter feels like a filler scene. Because from the first chapter I had the inkling that Eiguh'Ht is rather unsatisfied and disappointed with his father. So, this chapter feels like an extended scene that could be cut. But that is my opinion. Good job on the atmospheric setting. The flashback exudes happiness and I felt it, while reading the present resonate a slight misery tone to it.
Gehrel #3
Chapter 1: I liked what I have read so far. Reminds me of Nemo and his father. I do find it refreshing that your characters were relatable and feels genuine. I will leave comments on each chapter.
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