The Disappearance of Mr. Unicorn

Description

Luhan is a single dad, one day he is on the bus with his toddler who won't stop crying. Until the man across the aisle intervenes and manages to make him smile. Who is this man and why the toddler seems to love him so much?

Foreword

Originally written for Luminations 2016 , posted here.

 

Rating : R

Length : 8.942 words

 

Thank you to Xisto for proof reading and Lore for beta-ing!

 

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Glowpear #1
Chapter 1: This is still one of the cutest stories I have ever read! Yixing is so cute and you have really managed to write his character so nicely without it being over the top. Also, the relationship between those three is so sweet. How Minseok treats Yixing and how in love he is with this little family right from the beginning is just absolutely adorable. I also really like the slowly growing tension between Luhan and Minseok that finally snaps once they dance with each other and how Luhan begins to think about Minseok's puffy cheeks and pink hair more and more. You described this development so well and it was just the right amount of fluff!

Thank you for the nice fic! I genuinely enjoyed reading it and it really made my that with all the cute fluff! Awesome work!
lucky_s #2
Chapter 1: This is why I believe Yixing is the NO:1 Xiuhan shipper :)
Thanks for this cute story !!
Sheimary13 #3
Chapter 1: ^_^ Awww I adore this! Thank you!
annimaus #4
Chapter 1: What a cute little story....Very well done!
chibiirin #5
I read this one on lj, and honestly am happy, that it is on aff too. This is one of my favourites from Luminations 2k16. Thank you.
P.S. Why so cute? ^,^
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