First Impression...?? Should be Good

the other half

Author P O V

Siwon still in the middle of his soccer with his friends that night

 

a called distract them

"Oppa, where are you???" a girl said on the phone

"ne sooyoung, i still play with my buddy, what's wrong, are you okay???" he worried

"ne?? Its already 7.45 pm... we need you here Oppa" sooyoung reply him

"jinjja?? time really fly fast .... i'll finish soon, just bear it till i come" he looked his watch

"you are finishing it NOW" she yelled

"i cant, 10 more minutes... please..." he asked

"okay then... our guest already here.... you better get in from our garage door... mom will freak out if she find you not dress up yet..." she added

"i am dress up"

"in tarining suit?? you kidding me" she cut him

"hahaha... take a chill pill dear... i will be there... as soon as i could"

"your tux and everything already in your room... and dont forget to wash your body first!!"

"okay dear... bye be nice girl ther, oppa love you" he smiled

"yuck stop that, you make me sick. i loye you to oppa, drive save... and please quick!!!" she smirk

 

"Guys i forgot i made promise with my mom, i need to go home now" he said to his friends

"oh dude, come on..." his friend said

"yunho you invited too right?? siwon asked

"yeah... but my girl hasnt called me yet" he explain

"still i need to go, catch you later guys"

 

Yoona P O V

"hi yoona, thanks you can make it" mrs kim greeted her

"anyeong haseyo mr choi, mrs kim... thanks for inviting me to your anniversary party, may i congratulate you first" i smiled to her

"oh... dont be so formal honey... call us uncle and aunt..." she added

"as usual ma'am... hahahah" i smiled

 

"come here meet my son..." she take my hand with her

and i saw a handsome person right in front of my face

"yoona, this is choi minho, he is sooyoung little brother, minho show your respect to the lady" she asked him

"anyeong haseyo noona" he bow to me

"anyeong haseyo minho si.... yoona imnida" i bow back to him

"isnt she beauty minho??" mrs kim asked minho

"yes mom she is"

the only thing i can do just blushing

"you look great as weel" i said

"yoona run her own clothing label, her boutique is the best, the thing that you wore just now is her"

"wow amazing yoona si..." he smiled to me

"ne kamsahamnida minho si, so what you doing for living, you are the son who own famous building in Seoul"

"right minho, even yoona asked about that too, you already graduate from college, just find a job" her mom widened her eyes on her son

"i am searching mom" he pouted

"you see yoona i have 2 son who cant gave me a little happiness in my old time"

"my eldest son doesnt want to have married he just hang out with girl he met, he's not interest in relationship, since he and his girlfriend broke up last year"

once again i smiled

"why she tell me her familly problem, its not gonna make me solf her problem right" i thought

 

"yoona si, i need to meet another guest, i'll leave you here with minho, have a good conversation" she smiled

"its okay ma'am" i said

"call me aunt dear"

"yes aunty"

"good honey.... bye dear be nice to this young lady" she kissed minho cheek

then she leave us

"so minho si, exacly how many siblings that you had?" i ask full of curious

"i had one brother and 2 sister" he answered

"wow, i only knew sooyoung and sulli, they always with mrs kim"

 

" i told you to call her auntie" a girl voice cut me

"she already take you as part of this familly"

when i turn my head i saw sooyoung

 

"sooyoung noona i love the dress, where is sulli???"he asked her

"this is one of her masterpiece, she is already downstair with another guest" sooyoung said

"i catch up with her then" minho reply

as he walk away leave us he trun around

"yoona noona"

"ne??" i widened my eyes

"noona neomu yeppo" and he give me a bright smile

i just blushed and laugh, watching me laugh make sooyoung laugh too

 

as the party going i found my self getting bored

why i dont take my sister with me, go ara hasnt come yet, she said she need to wait her boyfriend

 

"sooyoung si, can i take fresh air"

"sure you are, are you okay, you're not drunk are you??" she asked me

"no i just need some fresh air"

"just call me when anything happen dear..."
 

 

i decide to take a walk at their backyard near the garage, and the backyard have its own pool or lake due to the size

suddenly i bump into some guy

with a training suit, he's sweat all over hisbody, he has big body, he look suspicious too me

 

"who are you?? are you thief??"

"anya... thats my question why you here, who are you??" he reply me

"i am guest here, who are you?? you stink, are you thief??? GO dont come nearer... or i'm gonna scream"

"hei i'm not a thief... dont scream" he came closer

"then why you here??"

he keep coming closer

"i tolde you to not come nearer to me, or i am gonna scream" as i move backward my heels broke

before i fell he catch my arm

"be carefull" he smiled to me

his sweat touch my skin

"HANDS OFF" i shouted

"okay okay please.... i am not gonna hurt you" he said

"asih... my shoe" without thinking twice i throw my wine on his body

"yah, whats your problem???" he shocked

""whats my problem??? you sneak at my friend party, and my shoe broken..."

suddenly he grab my hand, i just hit him

"get your hand off, you stinking thief"

"thats hurt"

he walk away since i hit him nonstop, i run after him, when i am chasing him my phone ring

i pick up and yell to him

"YA WHERE ARE YOU GOING??" i shouted out loud

""wow easy beauty.... who are you talking to??? or should i say yelling to??" its kyuhyun

" oh kyuu... thanks god you called me... i dont know who he is, a big sweaty guy bump in to me"

"carefull... how's party btw??" he asked

"awfull... can you pick me??" i hope he could

"okay message me the address i'll be right there"

"thanks, you are my savior"

 

then i join the party again 'shoeless'

"mrs kim i have a problem, my shoe broke i need to go home now, i am sorry i cant attend this party anymore??" i said to her

"oh dear whats happen?? you havent met my eldest son yet, i dont know where is he now"

"cant you wait any longer" she added

"i am sorry mrs kim, i think i cant, please say my thanks to mr choi for this party"

"have a bless party mrs kim"

 

"you sure dear you gonna home??" she asked me again

i just nodded and i am going outside

after waiting 20 minute kyuhyun fetch me

 

Siwon P O V

whats wrong with her, why i got hit on my own house

is she really girl, she is pretty but still she's scary

 

i take bath and wear my tux and come downstair

"Oppa where have you been?? its been too late you know, omma will mad at you when she meet you" sooyoung said to me

"its guys night i need to hanging around with the guys..."

 

"then why i cant hang out with my friends to??" sulli added

"where is my son???" my father came to us

we bow to him... after that my mother with minho came to us

 

"where have you been??? you know what time it is?? why my eldest son cant be here on time in this special day??" my mother seems mad

 

as party continued i accompany my mother

she busy looking for someone

"who is it mom?? you look so serious"

"well since my son is old enough i want him to meet some woman" my mom said

"and thanks to your late she already left" she added

i cant face her right now

 

suddenly my father came to us

"son, meet mr Hong and his daughter Yui"

i bow to the.

"so this is the heir of Choi?? Choi Siwon, How you doing kid??"

"i am find sir, thank you"

 

"anyeong haseyo siwon si"

"anyeong haseyo Yui-si"

we bow to each other

 

as time goes by the party end till midnight

 

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here we go again

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i put it little commedy here sorry if its not funny

forgive me if you found any grammar mistake

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Stand4SeoKyu #1
Chapter 12: This is gonna be Seokyu or kyu with another???
Cos so much kyuna moment here..
Blinkeu_21
#2
new reader here...=)
pls.. update soooon..!!
i love jiyeon and thunder couple...
cheonji couple....
xingtizen
#3
Please have more moments. Thnk q!!! Update soon. :DDD
mxsfits #4
yoonwon!
lovely_k-pop #5
update soon, please.. ^_^
mayang #6
wah!!! luv it.. I hope u will insert a few elements that will make us as readers are excited n curious about what will happen next .. it will make ur story interesting because u will play with readers' emotions.. anyway.. i really luv this st0ry!!!
Shyakira_Everlasting
#7
you're welcome. don't worry, just continue practicing and improving, i'm sure you can. actually, i'm also still learning and improving my english too :) good luck!<br />
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@YOONWON_imARA hello too :) i know. i'm just giving her suggestion for the better ^^
mxsfits #8
really great!
marcyela
#9
@angelnguyen wow, they are my bias to.... hehehehe<br />
@mayang i'll try to update often dear<br />
@imsoinlove_seokyu just wait, their momment at next chapter<br />
@joycelee_1996 you know i love them too... they are perfect<br />
@hope2beinlove just wait dear, i prepared them already<br />
@Shyakira_Everlasting thanks for your advide, i'll work harder next time, please bear if you find one<br />
@lovely_k-pop this is yoonwon moment dear its still long to go, i promise to you<br />
@YOONWON_imARA hai hai hai how you doing there :), thanks and btw is it good???<br />
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mxsfits #10
*that. thanks