Chapter 1: This is good :)

Chapter 1: so sweet :D

Chapter 1: This is really nice. It's been a long time that a simple fic can affect me such as this had. The sequencing and the simplistic way of penning it down was a brilliant move. The idea is so unique too. Thank you for writing and sharing this with us!!

You're sequencing style is really interesting and unique. It makes the story turn from something simple to something awesome. I love it. ^_^

Chapter 1: Beautifully done.

Chapter 1: Damn this is so beautiful! Love it so much <3

I love it when a fic is written like this. Like i'm supposed to thi k and unravel how the story goes and what happened. Hahahaha. i love this :) thank you for sharing this with us. :*

Chapter 1: this is lovely!!! I like it

Chapter 1: Cute!! This is really nice! Of course Yunho would love to grant Jaejoong's wishes. How can he not? XD

Chapter 1: Haha~~ this is good^^