new white review shop ._.

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Welcome to New White Review Shop ._. !

I notice that there aren't too many review shops currently open these days, probably due to exam weeks. Therefore, I decide to open my own one. I've been in AFF for a year but I've been reading fanfics for about five years. I also read physical books during my free time. In this shop, I'll be really honest about what I think of your fic. My main purpose is to give constructive criticisms so don't be afraid. If you also notice, I made this shop spontaneously. I have no time to put some layouts. I also want to focus on the content more. Hence the name white, and it's a new review shop. ._.

I accept all characters (idols, OC, actors, Korean, Japanese, Taiwanese, etc) and all genres except , , yuri, mpreg, and the likes. You can just request, and if I think that I won't be comfortable to read it and give it a proper review, I'll just politely decline it in your comment post. I'll read about five chapters at maximum but if I'm feeling the fic, I might read more chapters.

So without further ado, these are my rubrics. It's just the standard set. It's not just scored. This will come with a somewhat detailed dissection.

RUBRICS:

Title and Poster (5)

Description and Foreword (10)

Plot (15)

Creativity/Flavour (10)

Flow and Pacing (15)

Technicals [Grammar, Spelling, Punctuation] (15)

Writing Style (10)

Characterization (10)

X-factor [¤] (10)

Total = 100


REQUESTS TRACK BOARD (Title, Author, Status). 

01. leaving suburbia, aggressively, reviewed

 

 

 


BLACKLIST (if you bash me or if you're being rude in the comments section). [I don't know if this will be useful because there's a report button and "downvote comment" for a reason.]

 

 

 


I can be a bit harsh but do not be discouraged. I want to help AFF writers so bashers can already stop saying that AFF has low standards. I see a lot of works with potential here in this site, and it's a bit of a letdown if they can't be stretched to the optimum level that they can be. It's also because it's distracting to see the basics of writing being messed up from a readers' point of view. I'm not a writer so you can ignore the worry that I might make use of your stories for my own reference (I know some review seekers have that worry). The reviews will be made in my view as a reader (that's why I have the X-factor in the rubrics).

 

Request now!  ;)


 

Foreword


This is the request form (I repeat: no rated stuff and same- pairings).

Hassle-free REQUEST FORM (to be pasted in the comments section):

Story Title:

Story Link:

Username:

Length: No. of Chapters, Long/Short/1-Shot

Characters:

Genre:

What aspect do you want me to focus in: Grammar, plot, etc.


How fast can I do it? I have a life outside AFF but I'll try to get it done as soon as you send it in and/or whenever I can. I'm the only one running this review shop.

HOW TO CREDIT: I would love it if you would credit me in your foreword with a simple link to this shop if you want to. But I will really appreciate it if you subscribe and upvote after you pick up your review. If you pick your review up, don't just comment "picked up". Share what you feel about the review. ^_^


 

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cherrybom_72 #1
Story Title: "Poison Flower"
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1030799/poison-flower-action-fantasy-seulgi-exo-ot12-redvelvet-exovelvet
Username: cherrybom_72
Length: 38 chapters (Did I freak you out? Hehe... It's pretty long and it's still on going)
Characters: Exo (All 12...well, mostly. It's a bit unexplainable. But you will understand once you begin to read the story), Kang Seulgi (RV)
Genre: Fantasy
What aspect do you want me to focus in: Characterization!, Grammar, flow of the story (Lately, I have been feeling like I'm slipping away when it comes to the build up of the story)

It will be amazing if you could review based on all the chapters but it's incredibly long (Even the content of each) and I will completely understand if you decide on reviewing based only on a few of them. Thank you!
shashashy
#2
Story Title:
Pink Laces

Story Link:
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1119830

Username:
shashashy

Length:
4 ATM

Characters:
OC || Cha Eun Woo

Genre:
Romance, Fluff

What aspect do you want me to focus in:
Please focus more on flow and characterization, I struggle there mostly out of all the elements...
douxsoleil #3
Story Title: Allegro: Young Blood and Electric Blue Skies
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1096181/allegro-young-blood-and-electric-blue-skies-angst-krystal-seulgi-mingyu-seventeen-wonwoo-redvelvet
Username: douxsoleil
Length: 7/Long (despite the amount of chapters, the content of each chapter is pretty long)/Completed
Characters: Jeon Wonwoo, Kang Seulgi, Kim Mingyu, Jung Soojung, etc
Genre: friendship, family, coming of age, angst, romance
What aspect do you want me to focus in: Characterization and Plot

Note: I hope you don't mind the long chapters anyway, and enjoy while doing the review I guess :)