Chapter 10: I think your story is cute~
Please update soon! :)

Grace~~ nabasa ko na
Notes:
Nag-improve ka naman at least in your latest updates but:
* dialogues should SOMETIMES be separated from the paragraphs
* as much as possible, don't use other languages 'kay?
* Use capital letters when needed and apostrophe as well
ex. "im so full. what should i do after this?" i mumbled.
It should be "I'm so full. What should I do after this?" I mumbled.
* Don't put actions between the character's dialogues
* The progress of the story had been too fast, this would have been more interesting if some details are told
* Put some details, even just a bit in the sentences after the dialogues
ex. I frowned -->> I frowned as a sign of sadness/disappointment

But nevertheless I think your story is cute
bagay sa kahit anong edad~ at proud ako sayo~`~~~~`

*waves* Hi gracey~^^ hehe... I can't wait for another update :) and by the way, I think, it's Sandeul who Ae Yeon saw at her doorstep... ^_^ update soon ♥

cute :">

jinyoungie!!!

v thank you so much~ :)

Great plot~ Update soon*

Sure. :) Haha~

I need more BaDeul pwease update soon ;^; me likey <3