a rose by any other name (would never smell as sweet)

Description

Jihyo's exhausted, but she can't sleep, not while Dahyun is inches away, colorful hair a surprisingly well-blended addition to the moonlight hanging cold and keen over her features, all soft and angled and all too beautiful.

She doesn't look anymore, and she doesn't touch either (because such a lovely image isn't hers anyway) but it's there.

(Simply: Jihyo is pining and it kinda hurts, because she's far too responsible to be selfish)

Foreword

this is completely self-indulgent and partly a filler for the fic series im working on but since im heading off somewhere for around a week with no wifi to speak of, ive decided to put in a quick fluffangst piece so no one gets too antsy

either way, first official fic here and the title is basically some ultra-prosey poetry (im bad with titles im sorry people) i hope you understand it, or not, who knows im a lmao 

also i hope youre not allergic to italics :^)

(lets also insert implied establishedrelationship!Dahna bc i cant give poor bby jihyo a break but shes a good leader AND thatll hurt more)

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kimiikay #1
Chapter 1: this is so good. i'm crying
ryantwn #2
Chapter 1: How do you smith out something like this? I'm tearing at how sad it is. Not sobbing painfully but just sitting here and letting the tears flow as I keep reading. Good god you have a way with words.
Ozaira #3
I really love your writing.
Herhorizon #4
Chapter 1: Oooh!!! This was so painfully good that I don't know what to do with myself. These lines: "Dahyun deserves so much better than just old Jihyo" and "I love you... and everyone else." Oh my gosh, so painful and perfect at the same time! I can definitely see Jihyo harboring secret love and then forcing herself not to do anything about it, because she is the leader etc. And the way you write her feelings: the anxiety, the love and especially the guilt, oh man, you're really good!
I hope to see more Jihyo/Twice related stuff from you, because you're a really good writer! Fighting! :)
Panda_00 #5
Chapter 1: Author-nim pls write a happy sequel!!!
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