Author's Note

Paper Hearts

I would to know your comments about the first three chapters of the story.

 

So what can you say about it?

 

I'd like to hear your comments, suggestions or any opinions and suggestions about how I write.

 

You can always write it in the comment section, and I'll reply to you as soon as I read it. 

 

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tiemyxius
#1
Chapter 11: this is so beautiful, i loved it so much!! ((': i hope to read more jikook from you!
icanthinkofanything #2
Chapter 11: This is soo cute! I really loved this fic and the ending is great! Definitely one of my new fav fics
baebobby #3
Chapter 11: Its a good story. Its cute and lovely:) ;-;
_jeonchi #4
Chapter 11: Im sobbing. I cant even
AGirlWhoLovesJikook
#5
Chapter 11: The ending was great ;w; yes I loved it
luvarin #6
Chapter 11: Its okay dear.. the ending was amazing... i really realy love this story so much.. thank u for your hardwork dear.. whenever u have free time n inspiration to write i really hope i will be able to read a sequel in both of them is not sick anymore.. :)
luvarin #7
Chapter 11: Its okay dear.. the ending was amazing... i really realy love this story so much.. thank u for your hardwork dear.. whenever u have free time n inspiration to write i really hope i will be able to read a sequel in both of them is not sick anymore.. :)
mxv0109 #8
Chapter 11:
Pumpkin16 #9
Chapter 11: Its beautiful but im saaaaddd why this is the ending T_T but thank you author<3
Bangtansweetheart
#10
good fic girl!, keep going~