of homesickness and love confessions

Description

Bambam misses home and Yugyeom can't hold back anymore.

Foreword

Basically yugbam being hella sweet and mama jinyoung throwing his nasty tips at them. Mentions of . (If you squint)

 

I'm honestly so disappointed in myself this is so short and I put literally no effort at all into the end tbh please crucify me ???? Also english isn't my first language so feedback regarding that matter is also super welcome xo 

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stanwendy
#1
Chapter 1: I cannot-

that was adorable :'D asdfghjkl <3
samuraimafia #2
;_; PLEASE WRITE MORE YUGBAM! I need more
mrlasagna #3
Chapter 1: This is really adorable! And very well written, especially for English not being your first language.
The only flaw I noticed was referring to BamBam as "the Thai." I definitely understand where it came from, since we say things like "the American" or "the Russian" but it usually only works alone if it ends with "-an" or "-n". Usually we'd say something more like "the Thai boy" when the person's nationality doesn't end with "-an". It was a very minor flaw and easy to look over but I hope I cleared that up a little.
Again, this is a really adorable story and I hope you continue to write! I look forward to your future works (if you continue, of course) and wish you the best of luck!
Fighting!!
MissFanfiktion #4
Short and lovely! I likeeeed iiiiit:3
MissLalaMoon
#5
Chapter 1: This was short, but it was cute and good!
Haru825
#6
Chapter 1: Cute.... >.<