this is my character and where i'll be reviewing you guys, obviously.
here is the key:

Accepted: You have absolutely nothing wrong.
Pending: You're still being reviewed by me.
Errors: You only have 1-4 things wrong and it can easily be fixed.
Denied: You were denied by me for having 5+ things wrong with your application, you may still be reevaluted if you fix them all.
Rejected: You either struck out on all three chances, or there's just something wrong with most of your application and I can't handle it.

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⟪ BLUE ⋮ BERRY ⟫ 01
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⟪ RAS ⋮ BERRY ⟫ 00
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⟪ GOOSE ⋮ BERRY ⟫ TAKEN
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⟪ BILL ⋮ BERRY ⟫ 00

hey miya! thank you for re-applying,

so, firstly, most of the basic stuff is fine, but korean-american should be american-born korean, as her parents are korean so she isn't half american or anything.

moving onto personality, you say she's polite but she's also harsh? could you possibly tell me how these two would work? since they're polar opposites and i'm not sure how harshness could turn into politeness. another thing, being too mature isn't a bad thing nor a trait, so maybe you could use something else?

for her backstory, the "made in korea" section, there's a part where you say she was being given offers for modeling and such but you don't really explain that further. how would the companies/whoever offering her those opportunities know about her if she wasn't a trainee or anything quite yet? she wasn't out there. you don't specify how they know about her or anything so i'm confused on that.

next off, idol section. her persona doesn't seem to fit her personality traits- nor does the "mysterious and chic" part, so i'm a little confused about this? could you explain further how she's a crazy beagle, or how she's mysterious and chic?

her vocal twin isn't really what i'd see as a main vocal for this group, sejeong doesn't fit the songs i have in mind, so perhaps someone with a sweeter sounding voice or just someone with a unique style/technique like yeonjung? or even minah herself since you have her as a dance twin.

her trainees don't really add up, and you forgot to specify which was training and which was group training. 

you say her mother gave her advice on what company to join but how did her mother know about antenna? did she see on t.v ? did she research? please be specific on this since it doesn't really make sense to just know about the company.

the love interest section kind of just hurts my head, so i won't even go there.

all in all, if you can at least fix the things i've said here then perhaps she can be accepted but as of right now she's denied.

 

tba!

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