Chapter 0.5

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chapter 0.5


The divorce was arranged and Robert Cohn went out to the Coast. In California he fell among literary people and, as he still had a litt 


Kiro resisted the urge to vomit and pressed the button on his insulin band. He really hated jumping between worlds - his insides always felt like they’d taken a ride in a blender. Hana and Kai materialized a little ways away and he took a little satisfaction from the fact that neither of them stuck the landing quite like he had. It was all the satisfaction he was getting today.  

“You know, I really thought we had her that time,” Hana said.  

“We would have gotten anyone else,” Kiro replied. “But this was Malik. I should have anticipated that she’d consider jumping off the bridge. I won't make that mistake again.”

"I'm sure our fearless leader here is glad we didn't get Malik," Kai said. "Gotta keep that rivetting rivalry alive now don't we? Maybe he'd prefer offing her in single combat? Oh wait, she'd wipe the floor wth him." He draped an arm around Hana's shoulders, a self-satisfied grin on his face.

Hana pushed him away immediately, making sure to hit where she knew he had bruises left from their encounter with that world's Pi. "Tough talk coming from someone who was bested by a little girl."

"Hey! She was a teenager and I didn't know she knew self-defense!" Kai shot back, wincing and rubbing his arm where Hana had pushed at his bruises. The Pi had managed to break his grip by pushing at his weak spots and damned if he wasn't still sore.

Hana shrugged. "I'd hardly call that self-defense. It didn't defend her from me." 

Kiro rubbed his temples, he felt a headache coming. This wasn't a rarity with the company he kept. Kai had a way of getting on everyone's nerves and it didn't help that the world they'd set up their safe camp in was damned humid. They'd been able to find a valley with a cave network far removed from this world's civilization, but it also came with a dampness that crept into your bones and an annoying amount of mosquitoes. 

"I'll get the next one you just wait," Kai whined, a little too loud of comfort.

"Will you shut up before the intern overhears?" Kiro hissed, his eyes narrowing dangerously, and for once Kai shut it. 

Kiro pushed aside the flap of the big tent that served as their improvised command center. In the center was a table with a built in touch screen, several physical maps were draped over it and desks with laptops were in the corner. Kiro took care not to trip over the wires that were taped to the floor and ran all the way outside to where a solar panel was collecting power from the sun. The maps on the table were from the world they had just come from and showed the geography and landmarks. It wasn't easy searching for a single person in an unfamiliar world but thankfully this one hadn't been big. 

Myungjun was in the corner playing a little handheld game and jumped as soon as he saw Kiro come in. He quickly hid the game and jumped for his laptop pretending to be hard at work. Kiro sighed. Well at least he hadn't overheard Kai and Hana talking outside, that much was clear. "Did you complete the mapping of World 903TY?" Myungjun asked, a little too hurried, he flushed with embarassment.

"We did," Kiro said and walked towards the table. The screen on the table itself showed a map of an entirely different kind, it was more of a chart. It showed the different worlds that they had visited and the distance between them alongside coordinates and any safe zones they had created. Kiro drew a big 'X' besides World 903TY. "All business on 903TY has been concluded."

"So should I start looking for the next world?" Myungjun asked, his face regaining his normal colour. He joined Kiro at the table and peered over the display, zooming out to show a larger part of the chart. "Should we look for a new place to set up a safe zone? The jumps are getting long for this one."

Kiro looked at Myungjun a moment. He seemed completely oblivious to what was actually on. Myungjun had definitely not been Kiro's choice to take along, but their last QuSEF agent's ExtraUniversal Quantum Shift Generator had malfunctioned and he ended up in pieces. The guy's intern had been the only one around who had enough working knowledge of Quantum Shift Energy Fields as well as the EUQSGs they used to shift between worlds to be able to replace him. The kid would have to do for now, but that didn't mean he had to know the full extend of their missions.

Kiro shook his head. "No I'll have to report to Zhu first, she'll want to hear of our progress. Then we can figure out where to go next."

"Do you need me to input the coordinates?" Myungjun asked.

"No I got it." Kiro pulled up his EUQSG, also known as a shifter, a nondescript black box so much more important than it looked, and entered the coordinates for the home world. They were far from the home world and It would be a long shift. God he hated shifting. 

He took a deep breath, pressed the button, and the world around him disappeared.

author's note

 

And here's a teaser from Kiro's POV! The way I write every chapter will have a single character's point of view. And here we have a little insight into the QuSEF initiative agents and one of our main antagonists: Kiro! Lils and I have been working really hard to create the setting of the story and I've already got a rough outline and now it's just waiting for the characters that will fill it in~

Shoutout to Lils who has been amazing about figuring the science behind all of this. She's brilliant and amazing and I would not be able to do this without her <3 

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TheLandofBrownSugar #1
Hi, it's been a little while since the last chapter. I don't mean to sound impatient, but is everything alright with you two? The lack of activity (on this) has caused me to wonder, so I just wanted to see if everything was well. :)
experimentallyexotic #2
Chapter 11: Oh no Nari! D: Ugh this one hits straight to the heart, this poor girl. Her life was going just fine and then EVERYTHING CHANGED WHEN THE FIRE NATION ATTACKED! No but seriously my heart ;; </3 Malik wasn't even trying to wake her up she just wanted to go home, and of course in true Malik fashion was not super helpful (but she did try at least a bit more with Nari! That counts for something probably.) I thin the transition is definitely going to be hardest for her the poor thing :(
experimentallyexotic #3
Chapter 10: Namsun! My child! I still can't get over how perfectly you write him, seriously. And of course there's Zhei being an awesome friend and Hadon trying to be nice even though he's confused and I'M STILL CURIOUS HOW HE RECOGNIZED NAMSUN THOUGH.
Also the way Malik interacts with the Seekers continues to amuse me, it's a great way to show her personality honestly. She plays off each person differently since they're all so different, but the her-ness is still there~
experimentallyexotic #4
Chapter 9: Oh nooooo Jian D: This one gets me right in the feels, from the first paragraph you can just feel how hollow he is, and everything that follows is just a spiral downwards until he hits rock bottom. And by that I mean meeting Malik and her not being helpful whatsoever. Malik is amazing, it is really interesting to see her interacting with the new Seekers and this one really hits the hardest for me. You can feel that anger and desperation growing in Jian from the start of the chapter and then it just explodes at the end as everything around him just shatters.

Shoot gotta go get foods but I WILL BE BACK.
experimentallyexotic #5
Chapter 8: Seungchae! That last line about her tea always makes me laugh, your priorities are in line Seungchae. You can really see her curious nature in this, and honestly I think I'd react the same way as she does so she's super relatable for me ^-^
Also the first paragraph is seriously heartbreaking. Malik, have some faith in the new kids! You'll be sad forever if you don't make any friends D:
experimentallyexotic #6
Chapter 7: Bad guys away! I love these guys, did I ever say that I adore you for showing what the bad guys are thinking too? Like I know they're evil terrible people but Kai and Hana's interactions made me laugh and Myungjun is adorable and Kiro... I'm not sure about Kiro actually. He's a tough nut to crack I think. I'm looking forward to learning more about him for sure, and seeing these guys pitted against our heroes!
experimentallyexotic #7
Chapter 6: Ah I missed Malik and her snarkiness! And the Keeper and his mysteriousness! Eeee I remember reading this teaser a few million times and it still gets me super hyped up! On to the next chapter!!!
experimentallyexotic #8
SO MANY UPDATES. Hi! Sorry I've been MIA for so long but I'm going to comment on every chapter to make up for it!!
Soonyangel
#9
Chapter 20: You're on fire, wow !! :D I'm glad to see this back !

On to the chapter then~ Jian, no, don't do that, no-- who's cutting onions ?? This was so heartbreaking, even though there was no hope, man, my little heart hurts so much seeing him so broken. And Daehwan who forgets who he is noooooo ;u;

Kiro's team is one of a kind seriously, I wonder how much of a 'team' they really are, at least for Kiro. He doesn't care that much, he's just using most of them-- but Zhu seems to be using him as well. He trusts her enough not to ask, but ther's something more hiding in there... What do you have in mind, Monkey ? I'm curiouuuus. Poor Namsun is somehow forced to give information though ;u; I wonder what more he told them, considering we didn't really see what took place. And yeah, a rescue mission ! I knew Malik would arrive at some point. It's totally the new Seekers' style to go back and help their new friend, but it's nice to see that they're starting to influence her as well. I can't wait to see more of the changes they'll provoke in her ! Oh my Sigma, don't mention Jota, they're going to trick you now. You should know better than to mention your weaknesses in front of the QuSEF members. This screams trouble. Malik is so badass though, I'm totally cheerleading right now. Go go team Malik ! I do love Kiro though, he's a lovely . That kick in the stomach was totally deserved though haha xD

Man, this was so great, I'm so happy to be able to read more of this. Good luck though, with both this and Do or Die, you'll have a lot to work on. You can do it ! :D
TheLandofBrownSugar #10
Chapter 20: I actually thought about this the other day, and I seriously wondered whether or not this would go on. It's sad when you're really into a story, only for it to be discontinued--without the author giving any reason why. At least, then, you know not to expect more from it.

Regardless, I am very happy to see this story back. I understand how it is to be away from a creation for a while only to come back later, but I am glad you have returned! ^^

As for the chapter itself. Well, I expected a rescue mission, but this had me on the edge of my seat. Usually, I am a stickler for grammar and spelling, but I was so immersed that I didn't notice much until the very end (with 'mising' of all things). I really enjoy reading Jian's point of view just because he has so much to say! Poor guy, watching his best friend succumb to the world of the unconscious ones (again!). It's hard to lose, or come close to losing, someone once. Having to see it again can change someone. I wonder how this will affect Jian down the line. I am very intrigued by his potential development--I try to avoid the apps in terms of development to be in the same boat as the others.

Namsun is a sweetheart. He didn't have too big of a role in the second half, but I can understand his terror. Sometimes, there is a need for exchange to ensure your own survival. Not exactly survival of the fittest, but survival of the smartest? Not sure yet, it's too early (8-9 AM) for evolutionary mental tinkering. I love his friendship with Seungchae. I thought they would become friends at some point, and not just because they are both vertically challenged. x) When I imagined Seungchae, I imagined this cheerful, but kind of sneaky characters, but I love the way you're taking her so far. She isn't really in her element just yet, but none of them have had the best chance to show off their strengths just yet. I am waiting with bated breath! :DD