Chapter 1: Okay just one maybe a couple questions idk
But
Why was Sehun not leave for two whom years
What was he looking for
Nothing or did Jongin by loving him simply finally complete him so he could leave
And does he have a grave and do TOU think Jongin would go visit him ?

Chapter 1: Okay but
I'm not going to scream at you but I blame you for the tears running down my nose and onto my pillow okay
I blame you that I won't be getting peaceful sleep because my pillow is now damp and uncomfortable
But
It was an amazing story
And I wouldn't trade the ending with a happy one
It's perfect the way it is

Chapter 1: this is so sad, yet so beautiful :**
its already 2 years, when ohseh gone for the second time T.T

Chapter 1: WHY WOULD I KILL YOU I WOULD NEVER DO THAT. I actually didn't know the author of this story until I scroll up AND IT'S YOU AGAIN. I think I'm officially your fan now because I love your stories. I will make sure to follow your future stories.

Back to the story, I ing love it!!! No seriously, it's truly beautiful and I'm at lost for words. How can you write so beautifully yet so angsty at the same time. It was just.......PERFECT. The way you portray the characters and their love is simply amazing. The way you break them is also beautifully written. I just love the way you write. One word to describe : BEAUTIFUL. I cried so much for this I SWEAR. If there were to be a competition, THIS STORY WINS IT ALL. You're lowkey my fav author atm and to eternity. THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS. I LEGIT LOVE YOU.

Chapter 1: I knew he was going to ing die after reading 'The first mark disappears. It goes unnoticed by Sehun.' I knew my heart was going to be smashed into pieces but I still kept reading regardless. This story is just so good. I'd honestly order this book if you ever decided to sell a print copy like "Baby's Breath".

Your writing was also amazing. The tone as the story progressed was just perfection. Not to mention the pacing of the story. You excelled at something many one shot authors struggle with and that's pacing. Your story gave us enough time to fall in love with the two and you ripped Sehun away at the right place. Your language was beautiful. Really. Despite the story ending pretty depressingly, the ending felt so 'gentle'. I mean, don't get me wrong, I cried a ing river at the end, but the feel of the ending just seems so light because your use of language was beautiful.

Thanks for this!
Its so sad ToT

Chapter 1: I'M SOOOOOOOO SAD.MAN THE QUOTES HIT ME ESP THE LAST ONE.WEEPS FOREVER THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL
Im confused with smth doe
Sehun is a ghost and everyone can see him?But he slowly becomes seethrough and just disappears?So Chanyeol doesn't know that Sehun is dead but those gang of rogues know, that's why they ran away?
I STILL LOVE THIS STORY THANK U FOR SHARING!

Aawww jongin TT TT my poor sekai heart. The fic was really good! But judt one clearifying question. So sehun was a ghost that came back on his death date? But how/why? Also the birthmarks? Maybe im just slow. Still a wonderfill read!

Chapter 1: JAS YOU BIATCH AJASJSSHDEURIJFIGHUE8DKJF YOU BROKE MY SEKAI YOU BROKE MY HEART TOO YOU BROKE EVERYTHING OH MY FINE GOD
How long did it take for you to write this it's so long and I'm so satisfied
BUT YOU STILL BROKE THEM
I'M SAD
KISS YOUR CHERRYNOONA'S TEARS AWAY PLEASE
I HATE YOU BUT ILY
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