1984

Description

The year is 1984. It's a cold January at a local high school. Things are the same. Violence, turblulence and betrayal. A new student steps into a new life while the others live the same monotonous, boring life that they had before. However, with the new year there could be new changes as well. They could be for better or for worse. 

Foreword

I know I should be worrying about other fanfics right now, but I had to write this out. It'll most likely upload sporadically. Please enjoy and feedback and very much appreciated!

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JudJunz
#1
Chapter 4: I dont believe this story will be completed. How bad. But good work in these 4 chapters.
eternalpain #2
Chapter 4: Authornim please update soon.. I'll be waiting.... I hope Daehyun stops, he's making Youngjae feel like their relationship is being threatened can't he just stop beating Junhong and just focus on Youngjae or something.
inertia
#3
Chapter 3: T-T I came back to reread this but it seems like the latest chapter is missing
RealFangirl #4
Chapter 4: I LOVE YOUR STORY THANK YOU VERY MUCH THANKS FOR YOUR HARDWORK! <3
RealFangirl #5
Chapter 4: fak u jung daehyun..... @#$%&*+(<=£¥ authornim pls dont make daehyun to like the other members...... just make him love youngjae sofaking much.... #imdaejaeshipperyeah~ but make youngjae to care or like the other member so jung daehyun will getting jealous... thats his punishment bc he's being so rude '__'
inertia
#6
Chapter 3: Oh gosh, this is amazing... The way you write is so surreal! It feels like that's almost a nice beat to it; I really love the flow of this story. Junhong crying because Jongup was the first person to stand up to him really tugged on my heartstrings. I love how you built all the characters and made them so dynamic, especially with people like Yongguk who's average in everything but somehow popular, yet even though he strives for peace he's too afraid to stand up for Junhong in the face of Daehyun. Daehyun is a wonderful character too. He's sadistic and a part of me hates him for bullying the other kids but the other is really enamoured with the kind of character you built here. His thoughts in the third chapter were a really nice read.

And the one thing I absolutely love about the story is DaeJae! They have such a strange relationship and it's really stunning to read about it. I love how you described Youngjae and how his characteristics made him automatically a target, and also that Daehyun didn't know how to express himself and kept beating him up because he didn't fully comprehend the affinity he felt with Youngjae. From the way you described Youngjae in the first chapter to what Youngjae actually is to Daehyun, it was just really so nice to read. I personally feel like Youngjae could perhaps be in this set-up because it works better for him and he's gaining not just through less beatings (since he fully submits to Daehyun who seems to really love control) but also through ual pleasure. But then again, the fact that he lingered in the hallway makes it feel like he does care for Daehyun, but I still don't think he loves Daehyun as much as Daehyun is obsessed with him.

Amazing story! Can't wait for the next update ヽ(*>∇<)ノ
KwakNiela #7
Chapter 3: Oh God, this is so good. I'm so exciting for know what happens with DaeJae, but for first time I want to read about all of them. I hope to know what's happened in the mind of Youngjae about his 'relation' with Daehyun. And I hope Youngjae help to stop The bullying in Junhong, after all, he also suffered
The English is not my first language, so, sorry if you don't know what I'm talking about HAHAHA. Is so difficulty for me write in English, but I needed comment this because this is so perfect in the form you write. I think use translate Google, but I prefer this HAHAH
I hope the new chapters coming soon, tanks for write this❤
Bapsloli
#8
Chapter 3: I'm surprised no one commented yet. This is a really well written fic and I'd seriously anticipate reading more of it! I pretty much frowned upon seeing no more chappies to read so I'm really really want more hehehehe I like the highlight of Daehyun and Youngjae's relationship here among the violence and beatings and stuff. Hoping for more to come ♡