color me like that red sunset (so I won't lose myself)

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title: color me like that red sunset (so I won't lose myself)

genre: kinda angst

pairing: taekook/vkook 

warnings: none?? but a lot of time lapse- the time between- okay gonna stop here 

 

Foreword

in which Jungkook's losing color, because Taehyung thinks purple wasn't for him. 

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Amalya
#1
Chapter 1: This was an interesting take on things in general. I was certainly confused in the beginning because the story has a more abstract/impressionist feel to it with how you portray the scenes, but by the end it makes more sense. The plot itself isn't particularly original - tragic accident and amnesiac survivor - but how you tell the rest of it is.

I do admit that the foreword is entirely confusing in relation to the rest of the story, because it seems to me he definitely thought purple was for him, given his ultimate choice. I was also a little confused about how Jungkook would feel black about Jimin if they were all best friends - especially because there was no explanation about if that had happened before. I also know I really didn't like Jungkook's mother so you definitely did a good job with making her someone dislike/hate. Ugh. And I certainly felt bad for Jungkook by the end. I think I would have liked to have seen/heard a bit more about Jimin too but I know this wasn't his story.

All in all, it was quite the interesting read. Thank you for sharing and good job with completing the secret Santa. ^_^
DGNA_Forever
#2
Chapter 1: Wow...This was simply beautiful, and I loved the way you used colors to depict emotions. It was an amazing take on it, and it was also really sad that Taehyung died, but it seemed so real, and I really liked the way you wrote this entire story. Thank you...I loved it♡.
DGNA_Forever
#3
This looks so intriguing! I love the name, and honesty can't wait to read it. Thank you!