Sequel

Genuine Effort
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-this was written by Meleodiseu!!!-

 

Graduation.

It was finally here. Jihoon was finally free from this hell he called high school, free from the others who would torment him for their own personal fun. All he had to do was walk across the stage when his name was called and hope he didn't trip and fall. He probably wouldn't, but he had a feeling Seungyeon would. Then he would get up, brush himself off, and laugh it off. He was charming like that and would leave with a bang.

The only thing that Jihoon would really miss would be Seungyeon. He didn't know what college the other chose or was looking at and he couldn't help the small tinge of regret at not asking him or convincing him to go to the same one he was. The problem with that was that it would be really, really, really selfish of him to do- potentially holding someone back for his own gain. Granted, throughout the rest of the school year the two had grown closer and hung out more frequently- sometimes Jihoon would hang out beside the dentention classroom if the other got it for being too loud or cheerful (something that happened quite often), or the two would quietly pass notes in detention if Jihoon was wrongly accused of something (something that happened less often, but still too many times).

As it stood, Jihoon only had one more day before graduation. They had just finished practicing walking across the stage and received their robes- something he found redundant- when the principle released them. Instantly Jihoon turned around to look for Seungyeon and found the other walking towards him already, a bright smile on his face. He was convinced that the day he didn't see a smile on Seungyeon's face would be the end of the world. "Hey Jihoon! You excited? One more day until we're free."

Nodding his head, he let a small smile grace his face. "Yeah. One more."

As the two walked out, he debated on whether or not he should ask what the other planned to do after this. Seungyeon was the only person he really like

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DGNA_Forever #1
Chapter 3: This sequel was a perfect wrap-up, and I'm glad they actually admitted to liking each other. It's really cute and they are good together ♡. Great job, Meleodiseu♡.
DGNA_Forever #2
I loved the freligious behind this story and the characters were quite deep, especially for something that was kind of fluffy. Seungyeon's determination to apologize left we wondering why he would want to so badly, but it was answered, at the end of the story. This was a really good one♡.
Amalya #3
Chapter 3: Bahaha! Cute sequel. Jihoon's still a bit churlish and Seungyeon is his bubbly, always happy self. I could see that exchange happening between them at the end. I was a bit surprised it was Jihoon making the first move there but it certainly had the desired effect. I know he probably already had any number of tactics to cut Seungyeon off at the pass before he really gets going but I'd also wager he was probably waiting for the perfect moment to use that one too. hehe

I did notice one little typo in the beginning with principle (should be principal) but otherwise, this was a delightful read. It's certainly different from Tigress' style but quite enjoyable all the same and thank you for adding on to an otherwise adorable story. ^_^
Amalya #4
Chapter 2: This was frustrating and adorable and by the time I got to the end of chapter 2, the title made perfect sense. Admittedly, I read the comments before I took a look at the story and I saw remarks about lots of cuteness and fluff. While that didn't much happen until the second chapter so much, you did fulfill there, but it was so much more than that too.

The bullying scene isn't exactly new and it's not uncommon for people that stand out to be picked on in such a way, but I did like the manner in which you approached it. It's tough when you know your antagonists are related to administration and it's harder still when you don't really have any friends. I was a bit confused there because while I know his father is a waste of time, I had to wonder if he really didn't have any other friends. O.o It seems strange for a senior, especially if he's been there for a while. That aside, your handling of the detention situation was deft and nicely done. I found it interesting that Mrs. Kwon didn't actually expect him when the principal said she would but that's the way it goes sometimes. lol I also enjoyed that you made Hakyeon (I'm presuming) the calculus teacher. XD haha

As you know, I'm not familiar with either character so much but I didn't have to be to enjoy them here. They were both distinct with very different personalities and while Jihoon's sharpness surprised me a bit, I could certainly relate all too well to his reactive guilt after the fact. haha And I absolutely adored the bundle of energy that was Seungyeon. Even his speech patterns reflected his character and he made me smile more than anything.

I had to grin at how he spoke with Mrs. Kwon and got Jihoon out of detention early so they could talk elsewhere on more even ground. And your description of the burger joint and Seungyeon's reaction (or lack of it) to the place was very well done. The dialogue between them there spoke volumes and definitely laid...
AznRadio #5
Chapter 3: I LOVE THIS SO MUCH IM-
sunnibreez #6
Chapter 3: *flips table* my heart can't handle these fluff >\\\\< how can they be so adorable ughhh TuT
Thx u author-nim for writing this amazing story and a sequel ;^; hope to see more jihoon story with other idols like this one ~ :3
sunnibreez #7
Chapter 2: Noooo it can't end like this T-T plz sequel I need more love >~<
AznRadio #8
Chapter 2: OH MY LORD I NEED A SEQUEL P L E AS E
asanoyahhs #9
Chapter 1: aw this is so cute
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