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He didn't see Seungyeon for the next several days, despite being in detention each day after school. Jihoon couldn't pinpoint why his thoughts kept returning to the tall boy, except that he couldn't shake the feelings that his sharp words had hurt Seungyeon. He didn't know him, so why should he care? All he needed to care about was getting high school over and done with. So why did he keep thinking about Seungyeon?

If thoughts could have been a summoner, his had worked. On the final day of his assigned detention, he was finishing filling out the sheet, not even halfway into the session, when the door to the classroom opened. He looked up, curious as to who would dare to interrupt a detention, and to his surprise it was Seungyeon. He entered and moved to Mrs. Kwon's desk to whisper something in the older woman's ear. She looked out over the class briefly, then nodded and followed the young man out of the door.

There were no other students in with Jihoon that day, a Friday, something that he had been surprised of. But he'd tucked into his seat and begun working on the assigned sheet right away. It was the same one that he'd been given at the start of each detention, and instead of just writing the same thing over and over again, he'd taken to telling the story in a new way each time. If anything, it kept the action of filling out the questionaire from being too monotonous. Now, with Mrs. Kwon gone, he ducked his head and finished off his paper, trying not to let the curiousity get to him.

The door finally opened again and Mrs. Kwon entered alone, a smile on her face as she looked at Jihoon. "You're a pretty exemplary student, Jihoon," she said, completely out of the blue. "Have you filled out your assigned paper?"

"Uh, yes ma'am," he began, unsure of where this was going. 

She shook her head slightly with a laugh, then motioned for him to bring it to her. Once he handed it over, she looked up at him with a raised brow. "Well? What are you still doing here? Detention is out."

His gaze darted to the clock above her, showing that there was still almost twenty-five minutes left. She laughed and pointed at the door, though, and so without questioning his good fortune, Jihoon returnd to his seat to gather his things quickly. He gave her a bow and a wish for a good weekend as he left, which she returned, and then exited the door to see Seungyeon leaning against the lockers beside him.

A slow smile spread over Jihoon's face, one that he tried to keep away with little success. "How did you manage that one?" he asked in lieu of greeting. 

Seungyeon's cheeky smile grew wider, his eyes nearly disappearing. "I'm charming, if you haven't noticed," he teased. They fell into step with one another, headed out of the school in a surprisingly comfortable silence. Jihoon was torn between saying that he was sorry for what he had said the other day, or thanking the tall boy. Before he could do either, Seungyeon moved around in front of him. "Can we go somewhere? Like, I don't know, grab a hamburger or something?"

"Um, I don't-"

"I'll pay!" Seungyeon cut him off. Jihoon gave a short laugh at the excited tone in the tall boy's voice, and gave in with a nod. "Yay! Um, I am kind of new here, so... lead on!" he finished, with an over-exaggerated motion. Jihoon did laugh that time.

The place he led them

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DGNA_Forever
#1
Chapter 3: This sequel was a perfect wrap-up, and I'm glad they actually admitted to liking each other. It's really cute and they are good together ♡. Great job, Meleodiseu♡.
DGNA_Forever
#2
I loved the freligious behind this story and the characters were quite deep, especially for something that was kind of fluffy. Seungyeon's determination to apologize left we wondering why he would want to so badly, but it was answered, at the end of the story. This was a really good one♡.
Amalya
#3
Chapter 3: Bahaha! Cute sequel. Jihoon's still a bit churlish and Seungyeon is his bubbly, always happy self. I could see that exchange happening between them at the end. I was a bit surprised it was Jihoon making the first move there but it certainly had the desired effect. I know he probably already had any number of tactics to cut Seungyeon off at the pass before he really gets going but I'd also wager he was probably waiting for the perfect moment to use that one too. hehe

I did notice one little typo in the beginning with principle (should be principal) but otherwise, this was a delightful read. It's certainly different from Tigress' style but quite enjoyable all the same and thank you for adding on to an otherwise adorable story. ^_^
Amalya
#4
Chapter 2: This was frustrating and adorable and by the time I got to the end of chapter 2, the title made perfect sense. Admittedly, I read the comments before I took a look at the story and I saw remarks about lots of cuteness and fluff. While that didn't much happen until the second chapter so much, you did fulfill there, but it was so much more than that too.

The bullying scene isn't exactly new and it's not uncommon for people that stand out to be picked on in such a way, but I did like the manner in which you approached it. It's tough when you know your antagonists are related to administration and it's harder still when you don't really have any friends. I was a bit confused there because while I know his father is a waste of time, I had to wonder if he really didn't have any other friends. O.o It seems strange for a senior, especially if he's been there for a while. That aside, your handling of the detention situation was deft and nicely done. I found it interesting that Mrs. Kwon didn't actually expect him when the principal said she would but that's the way it goes sometimes. lol I also enjoyed that you made Hakyeon (I'm presuming) the calculus teacher. XD haha

As you know, I'm not familiar with either character so much but I didn't have to be to enjoy them here. They were both distinct with very different personalities and while Jihoon's sharpness surprised me a bit, I could certainly relate all too well to his reactive guilt after the fact. haha And I absolutely adored the bundle of energy that was Seungyeon. Even his speech patterns reflected his character and he made me smile more than anything.

I had to grin at how he spoke with Mrs. Kwon and got Jihoon out of detention early so they could talk elsewhere on more even ground. And your description of the burger joint and Seungyeon's reaction (or lack of it) to the place was very well done. The dialogue between them there spoke volumes and definitely laid...
AznRadio #5
Chapter 3: I LOVE THIS SO MUCH IM-
sunnibreez #6
Chapter 3: *flips table* my heart can't handle these fluff >\\\\< how can they be so adorable ughhh TuT
Thx u author-nim for writing this amazing story and a sequel ;^; hope to see more jihoon story with other idols like this one ~ :3
sunnibreez #7
Chapter 2: Noooo it can't end like this T-T plz sequel I need more love >~<
AznRadio #8
Chapter 2: OH MY LORD I NEED A SEQUEL P L E AS E
asanoyahhs #9
Chapter 1: aw this is so cute