Hyung, Will You Let Me Be Your Present?

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V still hasn't bought any Christmas presents for the other members, and he's running out of time.
To be honest, Jungkook hasn't either.
What could possibly go wrong when the maknae line go Christmas shopping together?
 
Well actually, Christmas turned out pretty well. In more ways than one.
 
 
 
 
 
 
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Amalya #1
Chapter 1: Well this was cute, fluffy, and ridiculously cheesy at some parts. hehe The active coupling was a little heavy when all the shopkeepers kept pointing it out (Christmas spirit happiness or something?) but I did like how everything worked out in the end. The gifts all seemed to fit the members pretty well (the energy drinks were funny and so was Taeyoung, all things considered). Their ice cream challenge was quiet entertaining and I did find myself smiling a fair bit for sure. haha

I will have to agree with one of the previous commenters about POV though. It was hard to keep track of who was talking or doing things at certain points. The setup of speakers in the lines was odd. Overall, it's understandable, but it makes some of the smaller points more confusing. >.> Good job overall though and thank you for sharing! I hope your giftee enjoyed this!
verinchen #2
Chapter 1: awww sweeet <3<3<3<3<3
Sar1900 #3
Chapter 1: oh man so fluffy and cute thank you authornim!
Poofyness #4
Chapter 1: Sho cute amg <3 but it gets a little confusing because sometimes the pov is not clear, great story tho
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