Chapter 2: Ooh, I like how you describe every detail, there's so much imagery, good job! Even though short, it's like you made every colour and feeling come to life o u o I also like how you relate the colours to feelings like regret, and also insomnia; even though i don't know the exact shade of the code xD but it's cool that you added that in.
'The world is a crude pencil sketch, waiting for life to breathe color into it in shades from the heart.'- I like this line! It's like you're given this life, but you're the one to decide how to paint it and picture it.

Chapter 2: I'd like to think that Jongdae created the faery to help him through something mentally, like an imaginary friend, and once the thing was gotten over with, the faery disappeared. Or, the relationship could've been something real, and I pity Jongdae because this is a great example of falling too hard and being so involved with your partner that once they leave, you fall apart and can't pick yourself back up anymore.
(I know this ruins the mood, but Jongdae should've taken a pic with her you know? heh)

Chapter 1: Oooo this is already so hazy and dreamy. The vagueness on whats actually happening and the serenity of a poet and a fairy with absolutely no words being exchanged seems to make the atmosphere of the story so light and peaceful. I liked how you added in how the girl was curled up on his bed but then later disappeared since it makes me more interested in what the faery and the poet actually have together

Wow, I felt the emotion and it made me so sad. Nice short story!

Chapter 2: This is so dreamy and breathtakingly beautiful. Two thumbs up!

Chapter 2: This was ammmaaaaaaazing :D

Chapter 2: I love this writing style! It is very unique from other styles, and honestly, your English was on point, so please don't worry about it! Please kep writing <3