Between Heaven and Hell

Description

“i should hate you, because it make me feel want to hug you longer and it really hurting me. When the sun already rise in it’s place i’ll forget everything that already happened and look for you, again and again. In the end i couldn’t let you go. But i’ll love you again, let me forget you for one day-the words that i can’t keep till now- . i promised to myself to come and go between heaven and hell because of you. “

Foreword

english not my first language so sorry if there many typos or mistaken grammar ^_^v hopefully you can enjoy this story~~ happy reading^^

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Ham_Minji
#1
Chapter 1: you're idea just perfect , just try to not use korean words too much , it well be annoying a little bit ... it's okay english is not my first language too ~
Just try too check it out and check the mistakes before post it ... the poster so cutie ... ~
thanks so much
if you need some help i'm here ~
Good luck !
nyunhyun
#2
Chapter 1: Hey!
I don't wanna say anything bad and usually never do because I know how hard it is to write but you made tons of mistakes, plus using Korean words is annoying so much. I'm sorry I couldn't read it to the end. :( And I'm also sorry for this comment...I just wanted to be honest. :)