Struggled

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My heart seems empty but it feels so heavy to carry.

Perhaps because it's actually packed with definite sadness, regret and frustration.

Maybe I should try to slide in some joy or even that so called sacred love thing to sort everything back to normal again.

However, there are prices that i must pay and it is expensive, really.

Is it even possible for me to beg at least for a tiny piece of it?

But to whom should I ask for?

The person I trust the most betrayed me.

They left me alone, hanging at the edge of this cliff.

My energy is being drained out to the fullest. My hands are tired to keep on holding while my painful heart is trying hard not to give up yet, though the evil part of my head continue whispering from inside to let my hands go if I think it's worth enough to end everything.

~Yoon Bomi

 

No, it's not right to end this.

It's just not worth it to let yourself fall down when there are always chances for you to climb up again.

I know you might get hurt for one more time, but it deserves a shot.

Now, will you take my hand and let's get out of this dark hole of yours?

~Park Chorong

Foreword

Uhh this is just my first trial on writing oneshot and my second fic in general.

chakhashim
pheww..i wrote the whole thing solely using my phone and it was torturous, really. but, im glad i did this oneshot. hope you guys enjoyed reading to it ^^

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linita-chan
#1
Chapter 1: I can't believe I hadn't read this before because it was really good! And the fact that this story is kind of real moved me :(
ChoMiyah
#2
Chapter 1: I thought Chorong is really real. Oww.. I feel bad for Bomi. :(
Squishybao
#3
Chapter 1: I can read this over and over again but still be amazed and touched :")
Gathaa #4
Chapter 1: OMG Chorong is not reallll!!!! But its awrsomeee!!! I was recommend by Squishybao and this rocks man!
Eririn #5
Chapter 1: I didn't expect Chorong to not be real at first though I did wonder why a stranger would go up to Bomi and open herself up so freely. I later sorta guessed it was Bomi's imagination at the part she woke up in the hospital. It's sad to feel so helpless :(
ALKimC #6
Chapter 1: Ah I see. To be honest I'm not really surprised at your A/N. The people with the biggest smiles are often the loneliest and the most hurt.
crazygamelover
#7
Chapter 1: What !? No ! That is ahh.. im spechless... she dosent exist... *depressed* *think about unicorn, rainbow, gorilla bomi, happy stuff*

Well on the bright side! U finish the story with ur phone! Congrats! A big pat on the back for you! Good job! Now i need to do something else so im not depressed.
eunbyulmi01 #8
Chapter 1: Wae so saaaaaaaaad huh!! But very Nice story
It's very beautiful writen
I hope you friend friend get well :)
melsody
#9
Omg that foreword. Seems so angst.