Chapter 1: Aww the truth of that old saying hurts. Btw, I thought this would be a vampire fic. Anyways, your english is great, just that your tenses are sometimes in the past and then the present. Also, for the dialogue, you need some punctuation inside the quotations. I recently got into Mamamoo and this is my first reading of their fanfic.
oh gosh. this is so sad TT_TT
anyways.can you write another story? i really like wheein and moonbyul..
ms.franzii over there.. the line "I'd be happy to have my first rejection in audition again if it means turning back the time I'm still with her." got me teary~ wheein ah~ TT_TT
Chapter 1: "I'd be happy to have my first rejection in audition again if it means turning back the time I'm still with her."
;_; this is so sad.
at first, i thought moonbyul's gonna be with solar since moonsun. duh. lol. but moonstal is okay. there are just some things in life where in we only realize it when it's too late. sighs.
there are grammar mistakes but you'll improve if you keep writing! thank you for this :)
uuuggh.. i knew this would be angst but... my wheebyul heart. TT____TT
wheeinie~ why did u realize it so late?? anyway i like how moonbyul react and didn't say "serves you right for rejecting me"... it so sad i want to cry.
pls right more stories about them.. thanks author nim. :(((
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