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Case One: Dear Luhan
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Hello everyone~

You guys must be wondering why I updated this story even though it was a one-shot and is mark as completed but please hear me out!

Case One: Dear Luhan is now available in bookstores nationwide!

Lol joke keep dreaming Bambi

Wait something is wrong about this let me just change this a bit--

Case One: Dear Luhan is now available in wattpad!

That seems about right.

So, yeah, I decided to bring this to wattpad because I wanted to see the reactions of other people outside the fandom. Although I labelled it as fanfiction, you don't necessarilly need to be an EXO-L to understand the story. Heck, I just used Sehun, Luhan, Minseok and Jongdae's names because I'm a total er when it comes to coming up with those "rad" names. Also, I wanted to download it in my phone and found no other way lol

Another thing is when I showed this to my college friends, without telling them that I was author, they were praising it and begging for a sequel. Among all their opinions, the most common one was that the flow of the story was amazing, so I decided-- what the heck? Maybe, in the future, I'd get a chance to publish all three one-shots (in a compiled book or something like t

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prod_GLEE
#1
Chapter 1: !spoilers

I do recommend you put at least a [M] tag since this one was graphic as hell omg TvT clearly didn't prepare myself on that one cause i'm dumb enough to always jump in without looking at the foreword OTL
why didn't they just report the douchebag for buying illegal stuff (drugs, right?) and let him vacuum all their money TvT i can relate with the older sister for not attending his funeral.
also why did sehun bring luhan's father head back home? i thought it would be a pattern for his serial killings like a little signature for his murders but he never did that to the later victims so what's the significance of luhan's dad case that led him to store the head in his place? that's a huge mistake he made too like luhan wouldn't probably find out that easily otherwise.
why didn't minseok break up with luhan first but instead slap him in the face with jongdae beside him when he came back? what a jerk tbh -_-
i disagree with suho about karma getting back to them quickly though. even if he didn't mean they deserved their deaths it was still a bit off-putting. i'd say he could have told yixing that sehun was not killing people for no reason after all.
and i feel like luhan chose the worse possible way to confront the murderer of the people around him. like why not just tell sehun directly and risk your life by means of deceiving a psychopath and getting someone else involved (that poor thief! omg did i just put thief and poor in one sentence :o), he's such a flawed character as well but again, dumb choice you made there, mr. luhan.
why didn't sehun just die omg now he's escaped OTL and hopefully he stops killing people though, now that there's no person he cares for anymore (hopefully).
overall the story really seems like something i've read/ watched before, but that doesn't disregard the fact that i was still scared less whenever sehun described his murders. ugh! how gruesome. and you told us this is the least insane of your trilogy? okay this genre really isn't for me lmao.
megadamant #2
Chapter 1: Okay, I have a question. Reading Sehun's letter, there was a part where he wrote that "Lucy is in his parents' care". How should I take this considering his real parents do not seem to be able to care for her. So does it mean his foster parents, whom he ran away from took care of her? Or it was just Sehun's delusional thinking as a murderer or something? I know it isn't an important question to the plot but it'a bothering me lol.
rainboing #3
This was beautiful, I love it very much.
I will write my opinion on this now, so It will come to you shortly.
meghank99 #4
Oh my looooooord this is really great. I'm kind of worried about my mental health because I enjoyed this so much LMAO. Your writing style is really amazing, the vibe of this entire story was awesome. Your storytelling flow is my writing goals. XD I'm looking forward to more psychotic case files! :) I also read the foreword for the Baekyeol one and I'm excited for it!
HAYRIN86
#5
Chapter 1: @______________________@


*goes to read next insane letter* lol
matcha-cha
#6
Chapter 1: oh
my
god

that was so dark and twisted and THRILLING holy crap i knew something was up with sehun from THIS LINE ON: "Hyung, how is Mrs. Lu? Tell her that I said hello, okay?" CHILLS I TELL YOU

so basically everyone is dead. and sehun is on the loose. or am i missing something?? i don't know. the way you wrote this was so fast-paced and engaging like i was on the edge of my seat the entire time. poor minseok. poor jongdae. POOR LU HAN. i felt so bad for him the entire time..even though the story isn't told through his point of view, it's not hard to imagine how much of a toll all of those events would have taken on him. and dating a delusional murderer just to find out the truth?? takes guts.

i also really liked the crime scene ending and the banter between junmyeon and yixing. it made everything seem a lot more...real. (but thank god this ISN'T real because you know)

this was so creepy and perfect. i loved it. can't wait for the next installment. bless
Maria_K
#7
Chapter 1: I bow to you! This is truly a masterpiece and I'm looking forward to the other two parts of your trilogy! Count me in as a fan of your work, starting now!
Neptunica
#8
Chapter 1: OMGOMGOMGOMG this was AMAZING!!!!! I am so anticipating the next letters oh my gosh my heart is just so /mind blown/ ok woooo!! Ok, I'm good, CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT IN THE SERIES \^_^/