Let's Make Gold

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“I am not joking Jonghyun, I will rip this laptop to pieces.”

Jonghyun’s breath caught, surely he would not? Was his boyfriend that angry at him? Did he mess up that badly?

The older quickly realized that that was not a question worth asking, of course he did.

 

Foreword

Kibum is doomed to eternal frustration as Jonghyun's editor and beta.

 

 

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I had a conversation

and then this happened.

Please enjoy and comment ^^

 

Word Count: ~ 1200

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keybha #1
Chapter 1: aww this was such a chwweeeet <3
fivefluffyclouds #2
Chapter 1: Jonghyun is just what Kibum needs and vice versa. This is really well written. Kibum's sudden outburst gave Jjong a heck of a scare but it's all because he felt that he wasn't good enough awww poor bb ;_; love this <3
Rellamellow #3
Chapter 1: Woah. I always admire Jonghyun in these kind of stories because I don't know if I would be able to put up with Key if I was in his situation, I mean, I'm quite sensitive when it comes to people shouting and if my boyfriend came into our apartment shouting at me... I don't know if I could handle that, especially if it was a regular occurrence. I'd probably hide under the table with my dog like Jonghyun did, cry and never come out again lol.
So basically Key was upset because of his musical or something like that but also because of the mistakes Jonghyun made while writing and burst into their apartment, shouting and yelling and making all of them (Jonghyun and the dogs) hide under the desk because they were afraid of him and his boyfriend was close to crying and he didn't even properly apologize? Okay...
It's probably just me being sensitive and having bad memories of people shouting at me but I think he could have at least apologized or something. owo
I'm not sure if I got the message you wanted to convey though. What was it?
All in all, I liked this because Jonghyun was really sweet and you write very well~ <3
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