The phone

Description

The phone that was once whole and unblemished was now filled with cracks. The phone that I used to treasure and couldn’t live without is now a broken mess in my hands. Just like my relationship with him. Just like our love.

Foreword

This is just my second fic so criticisms and comments are always welcome. It's written in Ji's point of view. I had gri/nyongtory in mind when I wrote this but as the story progressed I didn't put Seungri's name in it. It just seemed better that way. But this is really nyongtory. I'm sorry if it's short again. I'm still treading the waters of fanfic writing. :)

Comments

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bb_trash #1
Chapter 1: omg this is really well written!!! maybe u could add more to the plot?? but PLEASE KEEP WRITTING LOTS!!♡♡♡
bongzable #2
Chapter 1: Cos I read ur fic after reading Gd&kk news,,,, it's really meaningful.
Thank you authornim :))
Seeoouull #3
Chapter 1: Really good job.
I'm so touched right now :')
UglyKeeper #4
That feel... This is so real, relatable. Good job :'))