Transitioning

Experiment 11

It was the morning of his return to the field, and DaeSung was less than pleased to wake

to the obtrusive buzzing of his cell phone on the nightstand. He swung his arm over with a groan, squinting at the too-bright screen. The fogginess in his brain immediately disappeared upon seeing the sender.

 

    Michelle <3

    Good morning! I wanted to catch you before you disappear into the woods again! Text me when you get back!

 

    DaeSung’s fingers flew across his phone as he sent a quick promise to keep in touch. Once finished, DaeSung collapsed back into his pillows with a girlish squeal, kicking his feet in the air.

 

    “God, I don’t want to go back to work!” He grumbled as he dragged himself from his bed and into the shower. It took him several minutes to remind himself that he was part of a team that was making ground-breaking discoveries in werewolf behavioral research and that they were currently the only successful experiment in Variant-Human relations. Michelle was important, but unfortunately, he had a team that was relying on him. By the time he had finished his internal pep-talk, he was dressed, packed, refocused, and waiting for the car to take him back to the research area.

 

    The car arrived, and with a semi-heavy heart, Daesung climbed in. He sent Michelle a text letting her know he was on his way, resulting in a quick ‘Hwaiting!!’ in reply. He felt the corners of his mouth twitch upwards, suddenly feeling like he could take on the world.

 

    The lightheartedness remained as he watched the deep green of forest fly by the car window. After he’d arrived, he muttered a quiet ‘thank you’ to the driver and rushed to the bunker door. Pulling his employee card from his pocket, he swiped it at the sensor before tugging the heavy door open. Beyond the door, YoungBae turned with a smirk.

 

    “Hey... Playboy!” He exclaimed, before leaping at Daesung, rifling the older man’s hair with enthusiasm. DaeSung struggled to escape from YoungBae's hold. He finally managed to tear him off with a sharp jab to the gut, emerging unharmed but distinctly ruffled.

 

    “YoungBae, focus.” JiYong ordered from the camera room down below. “DaeSung, come here.” Immediately, the cheeriest of the team shrank, all signs of levity gone from his eyes. DaeSung curiously eyed the change in demeanor, raising an inquiring eyebrow. YoungBae sighed and climbed down the ladder, his displeasure echoing in every heavy footstep. DaeSung followed, and the two quickly joined the rest of the team.

 

    “Welcome back!” TOP walked over and tiredly slapped a hand on Daesung’s shoulder. DaeSung’s mirth evaporated due to the tension in the room.

 

    “Hey.” He replied quietly,and turned to JiYong. “What happened while I was gone?”


    “The President came.” The team leader replied.

 

    “When?” DaeSung questioned. “Why?” JiYong shrugged, equally perplexed, and ran a hand through his hair in exasperation.

 

    “Yesterday. He was angry that Jordan survived Chen’s attack.” JiYong sighed. “He seemed to think we had something to do with it.” DaeSung’s brow crinkled in confusion.

 

    “That happened nearly a month ago. Besides, we can’t interfere; it compromises the experiment. We said that in our reports.” Daesung pulled up a rolling chair and took a seat, index finger tapping his chin. TOP voiced his opinion from where he sat next to JiYong.

 

“I think he’s getting pressure from the board about the success of this trial. They’re probably really happy, but he used to always preach against variant-human agreements. He only wanted government funding to capture a pack. He might be getting nervous now that we’re actually getting somewhere.” Youngbae nodded in agreement, eyes narrowing in concentration.

 

“The fact it’s Jordan probably pisses him off more.” YoungBae glanced at his team leader. “I’ve always wondered why he agreed to werewolf behavioral research when he was always against variant-human treaties.” He snorted in derision. “Just shows how people can flip flop.” Jiyong shushed YoungBae sharply. Though he didn’t agree with the President’s politics, he - abiding with policy -  couldn’t condone outright insults towards their higher-ups.

 

    “What?” Youngbae snorted. “I’m just saying what we’re all thinking.” JiYong glared at his junior, but didn’t protest.

 

    “Back to business.” He began, his voice taking on its original professional tone. He whipped around and pointed a finger at Youngbae. “You. Your vacation week starts tomorrow.” Youngbae shot up from his seat.

 

    “What? Why this week?” YoungBae’s voice rose in pitch. Jiyong raised an eyebrow at the sudden display of diligence.

 

    “Do you not want your vacation week? I can give it to someone else.”

 

    “Aren’t you going to praise my golden work ethic?” Youngbae paused, waiting for a response that he did not receive. He sighed, “I want a vacation week, just not this week...” Youngbae trailed off, eyes downcast. DaeSung eyed his friend, wandering over to prod him with a questioning finger. Where did his lazy, constantly complaining coworker go?

 

    “What’s special about this week?” DaeSung questioned, eyes flicking rapidly in between his team members.

 

    “We want to move on to Stage 3. If the President is getting on our case now, his presence is only going to get heavier as we go. We don’t want any more interference. Might as well get an early start.” TOP bounced on the balls of his feet in excitement.

 

    “Are they ready?” Daesung wondered, “I mean, I’ve only been gone a week, How much did I miss?” Despite his questions, DaeSung did want to move on. Jordan and Chen’s interactions made him feel oddly fuzzy inside. It was comforting, seeing that a human could reduce a werewolf to a fluffy ball of cuddles. However, he couldn’t help but hesitate.

 

Jordan and Chen would be fine. It was Chen and other humans that was concerning. As if sensing his thoughts, JiYong sighed and sank down into a chair.

 

    “Chen trusts her.” He glanced at the camera monitors, “I’d even say he’s gotten attached.” The rest of the team nodded in affirmation. YoungBae’s face twitched in a barely-suppressed smile. “I think if there’s anyone who’d be able to humanize him, it’d be her.” He turned to Daesung. “What do you think?”

 

    DaeSung grinned with a shrug of his shoulders.

 

    “You’re the boss, JiYong. Whatever you say, I follow.” A fleeting smile crossed JiYong’s face, the first positive emotion he’d shown since that morning. He cracked his knuckles and stretched his neck from side to side.

 

    “Then let’s get started.”

 

    Jordan woke to the cold. She hissed as the chilly air nipped at her skin and reluctantly pulled herself from the embrace of an clingy werewolf. She sat up with a groan, wincing at the dryness on her tongue and her ever-worsening dental hygiene. Jordan shivered in her hoodie as she stood and stumbled over to their bags, pulling out a water bottle. She quickly rinsed and rubbed her index fingers against her teeth, wincing at the frigid water.

 

    Jordan cast a glance over her shoulder at the sleeping werewolf. Even though he was bare-chested, he didn’t seem the slightest bit cold. Jordan felt a burn of jealousy and annoyance. Jealousy, because he was so much better adapted to this environment. Embarrassed, because she would have died long ago without him. She was not used to having to rely on someone else, and definitely not on someone who could kill her in a heartbeat. With a sigh, Jordan wandered back over to the sleeping werewolf to shake him awake.

 

    “Chen.” The werewolf did not wake, only grabbing onto her arm and yanking her closer. Jordan’s eyes widened in surprise as she toppled onto his torso. “Chen!” She admonished, smacking his head in protest. Finally, he woke with a snort. “Get up!” Jordan prodded at his arm, trying to get him to relinquish his grip. Reluctantly, with an uncharacteristic frown, he did.

 

    Their morning was uneventful, with Jordan starting a fire to heat up leftovers from the night before. Chen kicked a hole through in the ice, rubbing his face and torso with the frosty water. Jordan glanced over as the water evaporated immediately in swirling fronds of steam. Chen caught her eye. Her face reddened, and she quickly looked back down at the fire. Jordan buried her face in her hands, chastising herself for acting like a hormonal teenager when she should be focusing on surviving.

 

    Chen seemed indifferent, however, as he returned from the water and accepted the food she offered him with a nod. Jordan refused to say anything; she refused to even look at him until she saw that he’d finished, and sprang to her feet.

 

    “Okay!” She reached her arms over her head in an exaggerated stretch. Jordan internally screeched at her less-than-subtle behavior while trying to keep her expression neutral. “Let’s get going.” Chen raised an eyebrow as she walked away, head tilting as she continued to mutter angrily at herself. But he lifted their bags and followed her nonetheless.

 

    Jordan’s focus sharpened as she trekked through the forest. She relaxed to the sound of her footsteps. She glanced over her shoulder to see if Chen was following; he was. Jordan paused, however, at his behavior. He was tense, eyebrows scrunched, eyes flitting around.

 

Jordan was sure his heightened senses were catching something she couldn’t. Birdsong had stopped ever since the colder weather had settled in, and most of the forest animals had either gone into hibernation or settled into their winter nests. The only disturbance at night was the occasional fall of branches when the ice became too heavy.

 

Chen was suddenly by her side, eyes nervously scanning the skies. He gripped her arm, leading her farther west, where the leaf cover was more dense.

 

“Chen?” Jordan questioned, digging her heels in the ground. The werewolf did not respond, only tugging more insistently on her arm. “Chen.” Jordan exclaimed. She didn’t resist anymore, trusting his instincts, but continued shouting his name until he turned towards her. “Chen, what is going on?” He kept tugging, but jabbed a finger to the sky, in the direction of the lake. He paused, eyes widening in panic.

 

They began running, though Jordan knew not from what. For several minutes, the only sound that permeated the air was their pounding footfalls and hurried breaths. The bags swung in Chen’s left hand as he pulled Jordan along, urging her to go faster.

 

The sound snuck into Jordan’s hearing range. At first it was only a slight buzzing, a sound that could have been a figment of her imagination. But as minutes passed, the unmistakeable sound of helicopter blades roared in the air, spurring the duo into further panic. Jordan, held up only by Chen’s grip, tried to keep up as she tripped over rocks and branches, but found herself slowing down.

 

Jordan yelped as Chen’s bicep slipped behind her knees, and he lifted her into his arms. He threw their bags to the side and sprinted ahead, oblivious to the branches that scratched at his face and the rocks that cut into his feet. Jordan had never seen Chen like this. Fear flickered in his eyes and panicked breaths ripped from his chest. Jordan could feel his heart thrumming out of fear as he tried to run out of the helicopter’s range.

 

Suddenly, the sound of something being fired echoed faintly through the trees. Chen ducked and set Jordan under a tree. He threw his body over her as a canister flew past their heads. It bounced off of a pine tree, snapping several branches and sending splinters in every direction. It hissed menacingly as blue mist began seeping out. Jordan immediately recognized it as the anaesthetic from the experiment room.

 

    They both knew there was no use running. The mist was traveling too fast for either of them to outrun it. Jordan found her face being yanked forward, Chen’s eyes staring intently into hers. Gently, he tugged the front of her hoodie up over her nose and mouth, lightly covering with his hands.

 

    Trying her best not to breathe, Jordan watched out of the corner of her eye as the mist creeped closer, unfurling over fallen branches and boulders. She mimed at Chen to cover his mouth, to which she received no response. Despite her warning, she still felt the pressure of Chen’s hand over the bottom half of her face. He only gazed determinedly at her, waiting for the oncoming tide. She held her breath and squeezed her eyes shut as a blue wave swept over them.

 

Her lungs began to burn. She had no choice but to inhale. The mist was heavy and metallic; Jordan could feel it settling into her lungs, robbing her of her senses. Her vision faded and hearing dulled. She grunted as Chen collapsed on top of her, his heavy weight pushing tainted air from her lungs. As she faded into blackness, the last thing Jordan registered was her own crippling fear of recapture and the sound of an incoming helicopter.

 

***

 

*emerges from behind a rock.

Haiiiii....... Sorry it's so long, last semester was rough...

 

BUT

 

It's summer now, meaning I have more time and therefore have more time to write!! I've started Chapter 12. It'll get more fluffy from here on out.

Thank you to shooka24 for beta'ing this chapter, and for helping me out of my decapitating writer's block. May you continue being fabulous, even though you passed out while we were editing XD

Special shoutouts to Byul96, ihavenolifelol (I love your username by the way), SingMeASongASong, and wildwhitewinter. Thank you so much for

upvoting, it means so much to me!

As always, feel free to leave a comment, they are my lifeblood, and I love reading them. See you next chapter!

 

(Pardon the chattiness, it's 1AM)

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arnarth2609 #1
Chapter 28: this story. never getting finished will always be one of my biggest AFF regrets, i do hope that one day you will get it finished and puplished under a different name
Wanderer_bj
#2
Chapter 28: I don't even know anymore how many times i have read it already. Please come back WE ARE WAITING!!
BlueBlossomXX
#3
I log into this site for the first time in 6 years for this fic and tHIS HOE IN PURGATORY

I WILL NOT THROW HANDS BUT I WILL THROW ROCKS THRU YOUR WINDOW GET UR BEAUTIFUL BACK IN HERE AUTHOR NIM AND LET US KNOW YOURE A L I V E AT LEAST
arnarth2609 #4
i really hope one day this story get finished. it has been by far my favorite story on aff and i always hoped it would be published as a real book
Wanderer_bj
#5
Chapter 2: First chapter was enough to know how much I'm gonna love this and what a masterpiece this story is.
vujuha #6
Chapter 28: Wish this story would be completed. Then I wouldn't have problem everytime I read the story,aching for more and checking updates religiously. But I must say your inception on love is so beautiful. Most of the love stories can't even put a relationship without overdramatising it but this is just a masterpiece.
MultiStanK
#7
Chapter 28: Gahhh, I don't know what to say. I guess I used to think that love was best explained as a combination of actions and words. Words used to express feelings, words used to communicate, actions used to do the little things no one else can do just quite the same, actions to express affection.

So I had never really thought about love as a sense of almost completely unspoken camaraderie. Sure, some people don't need to talk most of the time to know what's going on in their loved one's mind, but I guess it never really occurred to me that love could be so quiet too.

Needless to say, this story made me contemplate that a lot. I loved the buildup between Jordan and Chen and the fact that even though they're perfect together as mates, they make amazing friends as well. Sure, friends don't really do the things J&C have done but I guess I mean friends in the sense, people who love you for who you are and don't hesitate to just be there for you, no matter what way that may be.

I'm trying to think of how to put what this story makes me feel in words. It's funny that it's made me both cry out of sadness and out of utter adoration as I watch Jordan and Chen navigate through the experiment and, for a period of time, just life together. They're both such pure souls who deserve none of what the world is giving or enforcing on them.

You know, as vivid and realistic as your portrayals of the humans around them in this story are, I sometimes wish I didn't have to read them.

When BigBang became emotionally invested in the experiment, I was already dreading the inevitable conclusion of something awful happening. The tension they all held in their words and thoughts was enough to make me want to skip whole parts of this story, to go back to J&C who were completely oblivious and just cherishing each other's presence. I obviously didn't though, which I'm glad for because now I can confidently say that one of the best parts of this story is your capability to create a universe and building its environment.

You don't let J&C's relationship take all your reader's attention, instead you shift it to the banter between BigBang, the occasional reminders of Chen's pack, DaeSung's relationship and even BTS. I personally admire that, because I think building up a whole concept and universe the way you did can be so difficult. And even if you figure it all out, it's so hard to articulate that into words that your readers can understand and actually love reading.

Your choice of words and the way you phrase your sentences is honestly simply put, beautiful. It makes the concept, which is already so intriguing, all that more interesting to read. Speaking of which, everyone knows asianfanfics is filled with stories of werewolves, most of which are about EXO but you manage to create something so absolutely different from the stories I've read that tend to have recurring themes and similarities in them. It makes me think that werewolves and EXO don't necessarily have to invoke a groan of annoyance everytime I see them in a story together. (I do have to say that my standards for the same are now incredibly high because of Experiment 11 though lol.)

Anyway, just a few more thoughts before I end this comment. I honestly really liked the way BigBang was portrayed in this story. I've never read a good story with BigBang as pivotal characters like this before, so naturally this is my favourite portrayal of them. (The banter between them and then between them and Jordan has been quite amusing to read.) I also loved reading about how emotionally invested they became as they essentially threw the concept of objectiveness out the window when it came to J&C.

They made me wonder how many other projects and researchers in the world have gone through this before, losing their sense of objectiveness and wanting to scrap the experiment because their thoughts are no longer the ones they used to harbour. It also makes me think about how we as humans tend to never really consider things like the potential changing of our minds when we venture out to do something. It's like we're so convinced that what we feel will never change, to the extent where when it actually does end up happening, we actually have the audacity to be surprised.

With BigBang, it started off as simple shipping before turning to full fledged crying as they plead for J&C to stay together, because they of all people know that what they have is incredibly amazing in all ways possible plus they don't want to see the couple pass away because of their separation. The pure conflict that they all very visibly suffer through makes their portrayal so real, and raw.

Lastly, I wanted to quickly mention my favourite parts. I legit teared up when Chen started marking Jordan as his territory the second time round and she found out what he was doing. It was one of the purest things I've ever read. Usually, marking is made to seem so possessive and it often gives me tsundere vibes, but with Chen, it's so far from that. Then there was the part where Chen would only go along with Jordan's vocabulary lessons just so he could hear her voice, I absolutely adored this part. It was the highlight for me, I would say in this book. It reminded me of Tarzan and Jane, where Jane would teach him all about the human world and he would go along with it out of pure intrigue for Jane and her world. [This comparison did however also remind me of Chen's first grocery shopping experience, because even Tarzan experiences discrimination just for being raised differently. The pure anguish Jordan felt then was so heartbreaking.]

Alrighty, this is probably my longest comment on asianfanfics so far so I'll just wrap up by saying that this story has been amazing to read through, even though it's on hiatus rn. I can genuinely without a doubt say that this is my favourite EXO fanfic I've ever read (and I've been reading a lot of them these days from EXO Gems (plus other fandom pearls)).

I think you have a real talent for writing and I hope to see read another update soon, whenever you manage to finish it. (Take your time!)
xoxo_88_kiss #8
Chapter 28: My heart ached for them. I really hope they can overcome this!