Mood of Love and Friendship

Romance, Schoollife, Friendship ::: Yu120599 ::: Title [4/10] Choice of words 1/5 Mood of love and friendship is quite a lengthy one, don't you think? Not saying that I'm antis towards any more than one word title but a study was conducted before and concluded that readers had the higher tendency to skim through mainly the first four - five words of any title. Apart from it, this title itself is overused nowadays. As a reader myself, there's a high chances that I might skip it. Relevance 3/5 It did has some relevance with the storyline but aside from that, I have nothing more to add. Description [12/15] Introduction 3/5 I liked the intro in a sense that it successfully portrayed the essence of your main character, Minju. However, I'd prefer if it were shorter. And furthermore, I think the poems doesn't match well with the last two statement. Something felt off as it's like completely two different 'mood' were being set up. In my opinion, it might be better for you to choose either the poems or just the statement. Flow& Pacing 4/5 Up till chapter three, I was able to get along with the storyline well and the pacing was just right. Theme 5/5 Definitely romance, schoolife, and friendship. No arguments here. Plot [8/30] Originality 2/10 The concept is overused as I've mentioned before, but the idea itself was tolerable I guess. Development:   1st 3/10 The main conflict of your story from what I've gathered up so far is actually, Minju's insecurity towards literally everything that she come across in life after 'that' point of time. Something happened to her, or someone who was close to her. I