Episode 1

The Shining Star
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" Just three more.."

 

 

" Then I can be free."
 

 

Emptiness and loneliness washed over a seven-years-old girl as she stood near the edge of the rooftop of a random building near her orphanage. Yes, she is Chorong. She's a loser. Everyone dislike her, even her biological parents abandoned her. She's suffering everyday because she had to face the cruel reality. Everyday, loneliness is eating up her heart. She feel like dying. She's suffocating. She's sick of being bullied. Everyone is treating her bad, she don't have any friends. No one wants to talk to her. But now, she feel relieved. She's going to be free. Free from loneliness. Free from emptiness. Free from everything. She's going to fly high like a bird in the sky. She lost her sanity.

 

 

THREE......
 

 

Her heart is beating wildly against her chest.
 

 

TWO......
 

 

Her lips curled up......
 

 

ONE......
 

 

She opened her arms. She's excited. Excited to be free from all the sin that she had made.
 

 

AND......
 

 

Someone pulled her back and into the person's arms.
 

 

" I got you."
 

 

Her tears starts to swell up in her eyes as she bang her little fist on the person's chest.

 

 

" What have I done wrong? Why? Why can't you leave me alone? Please

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Penawar #1
Chapter 1: Nice start authornim !
update soon :D
NoonaYoung
#2
Chapter 1: I'll say you have a promising start here as you managed to get readers' curiosity to what will happen next though your forewords do give us some hint. 'Cookie or Kookie', that's cute ^_^, after all JungKook is cute!
Now, I'll be wondering the story between Minho and Sulli. What brings them together and also the link between these two cute pairings.
FIGHTING Author-nim!!!
ChimChim1
#3
Why does this sound so sad... from the comments, i know i'll be crying reading the first chapie, so i'll wait until i'm emotionally stable and there are more chapters. (The wait is so tormenting)
beatrixbunny
#4
Chapter 1: i thought i was going to cry because of how sad the first part was ;-; thank goodness jungkook was there! this was a pretty good start and i cant wait to see how the plot unravels~ keep up the good work ^^
ahelpinghand
#5
although there are many schoollife fics around aff, i think i'll enjoy this one more than most of them because the foreword just sounds so cute! cant wait to start reading ^^
sofiaa17 #6
Chapter 1: Looking forward for the part 3 ^_^
samsomnear
#7
Minsul's fan here. Looking forward for the part3 ;)
Spartaceismylife #8
Chapter 21: It is fine I was waiting for chorongs and jungkooks stroey
Tulipa #9
Chapter 21: I will wait patiently :)
kyungsoo_love
#10
Looking forward to this! Even though our Eunji is evil. Hihihi... It's still good to read about a different point of view of her... Must have been quite a challenge to portray her as a meanie.. Haha XD