I Love You Taemin

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A/N: since i haven't written anything in a long time because of school i desided to write something since i finished all my assignments  tonight and i had a little free time. sorry if it's not at good. this really is the first and only draft of this so it might have some mistakes. but do hope that you enjoy it.

Foreword

can you promise me that you wont hate me.

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bingugigi #1
NICE i likey
Emmauk26 #2
oh, and don't forget to show what their feeling in a little more detail. ;-D
Emmauk26 #3
love it, but it seemed a little rushed; I really like to see this as a full story, you maybe things leading up to the confession, and then what happens after, you know when they tell the others, if they tell them right away, it's the end that seems the most rushed to me, they only just got together, you'd think that they'd want to spend a little time alone just enjoying that and getting used to it, not rush back home to tell the others, although i'm sure they'd wanna tell them pretty soon, being all excited that they love each other, and i'm sure they'd be nervous about weather they'd be accepted by them; I really like this, and I just wanted to give you my opinion on what I think could make it even better, because your idea is really good, and you wrote them so sweet and I'm hoping that you'll add to it, I hope that you find my comment helpful as it was interned, and I look forward to reading more from you. ;-D
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