The Mistake!

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Description

"A story take place in a different family background which first meeting become already intense because of the past, someone who doesn't know anything become a victim of the cruel punishment."

 

p.s : I am not good in writing a description...lol..XD

Pls be nice to a newbie like me..^^ Eng is not my 1st Language. TQ

Foreword

"What? "

"I found him. To be a good news to all of us, he's only living with 'old' gurdian at the crappy house in the village that we visited last time."

"Don't joke with me!"

"Well, just bring your lazy there."

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"Owh, young men, are you his friend?"

"Yes, may we see him?"

"Owh..so bad, he's not coming home yet. Usually, at this hour you can find him near the river."

"Okay, thank you."

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"Excuse me, are you finding someone here?"

"Yes."

"Ah, if you don't mind i can help you. Perhaps I know that person."

"Ahh, so kind of you. Well..."

 

A guy with an intense gace suddenly speak!

"Well, he got the same height as you. Got a pair of puppy eyes and y lips. Well, so irresistible. He look easy to play or.......been 'bullied??!"

"I-i am sorry but i guess i don't know him. Erm.. I am going home. It's getting late."

"Wait!!!"

"Where are touching? It's hurt! Can you let go of my hand. Please....."

"I found him!"

"H-huh? I don't understand who's the person that y...."

"It's you, sweetie! Guys, get him in the car! Now."

"W-wait..let me go"

"We gonna have fun later on, so, be a good boy or the person in your house 'die'!"

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Babytalking #1
Authornim....when will u updt this gold story of urs....pls...waiting...the forward already seems interesting..wakii wakiii...:)
ambar_namstar
#2
im waiting for this, really. Its so interesting, im glad to find this
LilyClover #3
I am looking forward to this the sneak peek and foreword are interesting!!!!
Imnotavegetarian
#4
Yay I'm the first one to comment. Well anyway, i'm really looking forward to the first chap! The sneak peek sounds interesting ;)